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Post by Nushiyama Yoshirou on Jun 29, 2013 8:27:52 GMT -5
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sex: male | sexual orientation: Heterosexual | race: Visored ALIASES:Just call me Yoshi AGE:462 AGE OF APPEARANCE:20 SQUAD:3 RANK:Captain
Do i look like a good guy to you? FACE CLAIM:Gamaran -- Kashitarou
HEIGHT:5'8"
WEIGHT:48 kg APPEARANCE:Yoshirou is a lean and a skinny guy, his body is not made to fight like he always said it is. With only a couple of trained muscle in his legs and arms due to his training. Considered as a tall guy when he stands firmly, this is rarely seen because of his habit of hunching. His skin at first is pale, but to constant exposure to sunlight it slowly became tanned. On his back still can be clearly seen is a couple of scars that was made from continuous torture when he was taken as a slave when he was still alive. His hair color are creamy blond, it is mistaken sometimes as white colored due to the light that usually shone on his hair. Yoshi isn’t the type of guy that would spend hour and hour from grooming, shown by his messy fresh from bed hair style. The only time you would see him groom is when he is on an occasion which require him to be neat or when he tried to impress a girl (which rarely happens by the way).
Yoshi face is not actually the epitome of girl’s fantasy prince or anything, but he is handsome in his own way. His eyes are brown colored, suffering from myope or far-sighted it requires him to wear glasses like the one he usually wears which is white eyeglasses with a symbol of lotus on it. He has pointy nose that matches with his puffy lips. His jaw is a bit pointy at the tip making his overall head looks like triangular. One of the signature features he has is his tongue, it is longer than an average person and his white teeth are beautifully arranged.
When it comes to his sense of fashion, to put it simple it is plain and boring. His usual choice of clothing is a white outer robe made from silk and an inner dark blue robes. It was made pretty loose so he could move around easily without limiting his movement and such. Underneath the two layer of robe is a lot of bandages, it is wrapped around from his lower abdomen to his thigh. When it is cold outside, he usually wear a haramaki (translated tummy wrap) to cover his stomach and an extra robe that is a bit thicker than the one he usually wear. To cover his feet, he usually wears a pair of wooden sandal that creates a pretty annoying sound when he walks using it. When he is on duty, he wears the usual shinigami attire with his haori tugged in nicely. He adds a couple of his usual clothing to this attire which is his haramaki and his blue inner robes. His zanpakuto is wrapped around his waist, with the hilt located in the left thigh. When he is in the human world, Yoshi usually wear a green shirt inside of a purple skin jacket and a skinny jeans with a pair of hunter boots.
Did i ever tell you… The definition of insanity? LIKES: Reading – “I don’t know why but I guess reading makes me focus” Besides from his daily activities, Yoshi always saves some time for him to just sit down and read something, usually about legends and myths, also sometimes a manga when he is in the real world. Poisoning – “I want to know what makes you tick” Due to his treacherous life style when he was alive, Yoshi has the tendency to make poison and trick someone to tries it. It is probably his instinct of survival. Spying – “I don’t spy people, I simply… observe them” Yoshi got a bad habit to spy on other people whenever he had the chances too. Always trying to determine if the person he is working with is an ally or a hostile, or just simply want to stalk some beautiful girl that he met on the way home. Quincy and Bounto – “Humans that tries to do an immortal job is so fascinating”Since the moment that he is aware of the existence of humans with strong spiritual power like Quincy and Bounto, Yoshi has put an interest on them and want to know them more, that’s why when he get the chance to meet or even better, fight with them, he would caress every single second of it. Sarcasm – “Ahahaha… the irony” Yoshi loves when people is being laughed at especially if it have some sarcastic element in it.
DISLIKES: Sleeping – “Why should I go to sleep, is not like anything interesting ever happen when I sleep” Yoshi always has this problem with sleeping, since the day he was reborn to Rukongai he is enabled to sleep for some reason, its probably because of his fear of something bad might happen when he fell asleep. The Heat – “Is it hot in here” Yoshi hates the heat, since it would makes him sweat a lot and it would be bad for his skin… as he says. The Weak – “You who can’t survive shouldn’t exist in this world” Yoshi hates people who can stand for themselves, even though they says that they have a reason, Yoshi sees it as an excuse to let people do they own work. Even though he once a weak guy, he despises people whom is weak and always need someone to help them. People Who Questioned Him – “If you don’t like what I said then the exit is on your left”He tends to distrust people who questioned his beliefs and ways of working, especially the one who do less and talk more. Snakes – “I like snakes… when they are boots and bags”Even though his zanpakuto form is actually a snake, Yoshi is afraid and dislikes snakes since when he was alive, his abuser always use the snakes to torture him half dead. He tends to kill one whenever he sees one of them.
NEGATIVE TRAITS: Perverted – “Excuse me miss, can I grab your breast?” Yoshi is straight forward, perverted guy when he sees girls that arouse him somehow, the typical personality of a young guy like him. He is also the type of guy that would easily be turned on when a beautiful girl make a move on him. Because of this he always holds back his power when dealing with women. Distrustful – “Sorry but I don’t trust you” When it is about how to get Yoshi on your good sides, it is very hard since he is a very distrustful guy, always thinking that someone might backstab him in every corner. Sadistic – “You better talk before I poison you” He is rather sadistic when it comes to interrogation and investigation, trying to forces out all the information he can from his target even though that mean putting them in a near death situation. Calculative - “There is a 100% chance for you to die if you try to fight me” Yoshi is a very calculative guy, sometimes too much. He frequently tells the enemy the percentages of survival as a result of an attack, and sometimes informs his enemy about an opening on his own stance or his weaknesses. Over Confidence About His Power – “I’ve already died once, so why hold back” Yoshi is unaware of his power limit, don’t know when to back down in a fight and always thinks that he is able to win even though in the most dire situation.
POSITIVE TRAITS: Loyal – “I assure you, I won’t betray you my friend”Even though he looks like the type of guy that would double cross you, but when Yoshi trust and believe in someone, he would be superbly loyal toward them. Intelligence – “My mind is sharper than my sword” Although people tend to not admit it, Yoshi is actually a genius from the time he was born. Always trying to learn new things and like to think big when it comes to his goals and such. Yoshi when in a fight, becomes more silent and serious. Planning ahead of his enemies and sets up traps and counterattack whenever he sees and opening. He is also very strategic when planning an attack on hostile ground and always tries to minimize casualty. Charismatic – “Just lean on me if you need help” Yoshi is actually a very charismatic guy. He had all the things that a leader need to have; confidence, character (even though a bit unstable), and the most important determination. His intelligence and reputation just back this up further. This also help him in the process of an interrogation to find an intel from prisoner as his responsibility as a member of the third squad. Determinant - “I will find it even though that mean I have to kill you” Yoshi is very determinant when he is chasing his goals or something that interest him, wanting to find whatever it is he want and also won’t hesitate to kill someone just to reach that goal even though that mean sacrificing himself in the process of it. Motivator – “You just need a little practice”Yoshi has his own delight when it comes to training someone else to get stronger, wanting to help them to achieve their best trough training. He likes to be called a mentor since it make him feels like an important part of the person life.
EXTRAS:What else did I need to say, my birthday maybe? It’s the 18th of November, I forgot the year though.
Weapons are made to kill... not to protect WEAPONS:A syringe pouch wrapped around his waist that carry 9 Orochimaru's poison antidote.
ZANPAKUTO:name:Orochimaru (Great Snake)
sealed form: When in its sealed form, Orochimaru takes form of a regular silver blade with the size of 60 cm. It cross guard is cream colored rectangular pattern wider than the usual cross guards and it has a wooden hilt with olive green and purple clothes wrapped around it.
spirit: Orochimaru spirit is a black striped purplish colored anaconda snake with cold green eyes and two large fangs with poison dripping from both of it every seconds. Its scale is harder than the usual snakes and has a triangular pattern. Orochimaru is roughly 60 meters in length and it weight at 3 tons, a very unusual size for a snake. She is very obedient and does whatever Yoshi tells her to do, rarely speak her mind and only talk when she is needed to, addressing him as O-Nushi or honorable master just like his surname. Although she hides it, she actually despises Yoshi and utterly wants to kill him.
inner world: Yoshirou’s inner world is a wide green grass field filled with vegetation and a river with refreshing water that is surprisingly cold than the usual water. Birds can be seen flying from the distances and the skies is cloudless and shown a pretty sky blue color. In the middle of the field, is located a trees with luxurious fruits from it and a shady green leafs, this is the spot where Orochimaru spawn from time to time, wrapping her body around the tree trunks and resting it heads from the branches, only lowering his head whenever Yoshirou wish to speak with her.
SHIKAI:release command: Ranbu, Orochimaru! “Dance Madly, Orochimaru”
description: When in its shikai form, Orochimaru only slightly changes. The tip of the silver blades grows a 15cm long fang that spontaneously excretes green liquid poison from its glands once every second. This slime like liquid poison can be manipulated by Yoshirou to his own liking and can be formed into a wave of poison or spheres that when it hits the target it would slowly make them tired and weakened them. When the poison hits the target skin, it creates a burn sensation making them feel like they were on fire. The poison, when exposed to fire would cause a chemical reaction that causes an explosion. The weakness of the poison is actually water, since water would make the poison dissolve slowly and stops the affect of the poison. The poison created from Orochimaru is customized so it won’t affect Yoshiro and if he wants to, Yoshi could give an antidote to ease the pain if the poison is exposed to his allies.
type:Poison manipulation
techniques: For: Shikai Name: Hebidoku "Snake Poison" Type: Passive Cost: Very Low; since this technique is needed to activate other techniques Range: Short Duration: 7 posts Description: This ability is required to uses other abilities. Orochimaru fangs spontaneously creates thick green slime like poison that's drip down to the ground. This poison is heavier than water but is lighter than mud, it would explode if its exposes to fire. Once attaining a certain amount of poison, Yoshiro can use it to trigger other abilities. He can only trigger one ability at a time when using the poison. If an enemy is exposed to the poison, it would cause them to weaken and would cause first degree burns and possibly second degrees burns for weaker enemy.
For: Shikai Name: Mamushi "Pit Viper" Type: Offensive Cost: Moderate to High; depends on the size of the projectiles he sent. Range: Moderate Description:This ability requires Hebidoku to be activated for 3 posts. Yoshiro slashes Orochimaru in an upward angle, it then released a rising wave of poison in a form of a pit viper like projectile aimed toward the target. This technique has a high accuracy and speed but would only causes second degrees burn if it touched the target skin and also is intended to knock down enemies and occupy distance between them. It could strike enemy up to 100 ft. If its blocked by another technique, the waves would simply splashes around the point of impact poisoning anyone whom come across the point of impact if it exposed to their skin. Cooldown: 5 posts.
For: Shikai Name: Habu "Okinawan Pit Viper" Type: Offensive Cost: High Range: Moderate Duration: 3 posts Description: Using the poison created from hebidoku after 5 posts, Yoshi then gathers the glob of poison around him into a single sphere. Then, with a simple verbal command the sphere than quickly moves with speed equals as Yoshi hoho stat. When its reach the designated target it then would engulf it inside of the sphere. To get out of the sphere, one would need a Hakuda stat higher than Yoshiro Rei stat or a spiritual attack from someone with higher SEI then Yoshi's. The damage that the sphere would cause is determined by the duration the target is inside the sphere, if it get out on one post, it would only cause first degree burn. Two post for third degree burns, and third post for fourth degree burns but no matter how long the target is inside the sphere, the poison would weaken them. After the third posts, the sphere than would dissolve releasing the target. This technique could also be use to collaborate with hado techniques since the poison that was used to form the sphere would explode if exposed to fire, the victim then would suffice to fourth degree burns and sometimes death. Cooldown: 3 post.
For: Shikai Name: Yamakagashi "Japanese Grass Snake" Type: Defensive Cost: Medium to very high; Depends on the opposition attack. Range: Close Duration: 2 post Description: After using hebidoku for 3 posts, Yoshi then can form a grass snake like creature from the poison globs around him. This creature then would encircle around Yoshiro creating a dome like structure capable of holding 3 to 4 guys inside it. The amount of times this technique can be used is dependent on the magnitude of defense required and the difference between the two parties. Against a significantly stronger opponent more reiatsu is required to uphold the poison snake dome thus its effects are more taxing whilst a significantly weaker opponent requires minimal energy, thus less taxing, and can be used more frequently. If the enemy touched the dome, the effects of the poison would cause them to weaken. It requires a 3 posts cooldown to use again. It needed a SEI stat higher than Yoshi's to break the dome.
BANKAI: name: Yamata No Orochimaru
description: When Bankai is activated, a puff of smokes exert, the zanpakuto vanishes and from Yoshi’s back spawns eight purple serpentine snake like heads that moves like tendrils. The eyes on each snake head is bright yellow can be seen glowing even in the darkest night. This serpentine heads has the ability to think on its own and doesn’t need to be controlled by Yoshiro though commands from him would make the attack or movement more fluid and stronger. Each of this heads are capable to create poison and are really strong. The poison from Orochimaru fangs changed into a purplish color and has a very acute odor. It now can also take form of clouds like substances. The two bottoms serpentine heads is used for walking and for movement; the second pair of heads from below is used for mashing and slashing. The third pair is used as hands, grabbing and throwing to the likes of Yoshi, and the last pair, which is the upper one, is used to excrete poison whether it is liquid or cloud like.
type: Eight serpentine heads that can be used to his own likings and creates poison.
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techniques:
For: Bankai Name: Sen'ei Tajashu "Many Hidden Shadow Snake Hands" Type: Offensive Cost: Moderate Range: Short to Mid Range Duration: 2 posts Description: Yoshi put his right hand forward and sent one of the serpentine heads in his back toward the target, the serpentine snakes will multiply into 8 giant snakes with a size smaller than the serpentine head usual size and would travels toward the target with a speed equals to Yoshi hoho stat. The swarm of big snakes appear in an instant, each snake individually doing something like intimidating, diverting, or capturing the enemy in a cooperative attack. If their Hakuda is lower than Yoshi bukijuu, the target would be entangled and it also requires a SEI stat higher than Yoshi to break it. After the attack the multiple heads return to be a single serpentine head with the target gauge at the mouth of the snake. The attack damage is determined by Yoshi SEI stat and it will also cause the target to weaken from the poison injected from the snake fangs. The serpentine head could reach about 50 meter. Cooldown: 2 posts
For: Bankai Name: Ugajin "Snaked Bodied Water God" Type: Defensive Cost: Depends on the opposition attack Range: Short Duration: 2 posts Description: Using the eight serpentine heads on his back, Yoshirou formed a shield by entangling them to each other until in becomes a solid shield. This shield is designed to uphold spiritual powered attack of SEI stat lower than Yoshi's. Against a significantly stronger opponent more reiatsu is required to uphold the shield thus its effects are more taxing whilst a significantly weaker opponent requires minimal energy, thus can be used more frequently. Cooldown: 3 posts
For: Bankai Name: Happi Benzaiten "Eight Arms Holding Weapons Of The Protector" Type: Offensive Cost: High; since this is Yoshi current strongest attack, he can only perform this once since it would cost him dire physical strain on his body. Range: Long Duration: 1-3 posts; the longer the charge of the technique, higher the damages it cost. Description: Using the eight serpentine heads from his back, Yoshiro then focuses his reaitsu on the target. The eight heads behind him aim toward the target as they open their mouths widely (the number of heads used in the technique can be lessen in cost of the damage it cost but would lower the taxing Yoshi gets from executing it. From inside the serpentine mouths, a concentrated poisonous sphere is formed. When released, this eight concentrated sphere grows twice of it original size and travels toward the target with speed equal to Yoshi hoho stat. If it hits the target, the force created from the impact is equal to his SEI stat and it would liquify engulfing poison around the point of impact that would cost one to second degrees burns if the target HAN is higher than Yoshi SEI stat and if its lower than would cause third degrees burn and could weaken the enemy. If the target is hits by all the poison sphere, it could cost fatal wounds and in some case is death. Cooldown: Can only be used once in a battle.
For: Bankai Name: Dokuarashi "Poison Storm" Type: Offensive Cost: High; depends on the duration this technique is used. Range: Long, 250 feet maximum. Duration:Can hold up until 7 posts Description: Two of the serpentine heads pointed upward as they released a purple poisonous cloud up toward the sky. The purple clouds need about three posts to spread in the surrounding area. After it spreads around, the clouds then would started to darken as it rains down. The water produced from this cloud is actually slime like liquid poison, if exposed to the target body, it would weaken them and eventually, if the target stays to long inside the area it could result on a physical restrain that is strong enough to retires the enemy from the battle. This poison also will explode if exposed to fire and like the other poison from Orochimaru, it would also cost burns depends on the duration the target is at the area of the attack. Cooldown: Can only be used once in a battle
Inner Hollow: name: Hebi (lit. snake) appearance: Hebi is the polar opposite of Yoshirou. He is basically a menace that has been given a face and a body. His face resembles Yoshi minus the eyeglasses, his scleras are black and his pupils are light greenish color. His clothes compared to Yoshi are neater with a neat hairstyle and formal royalty attire. His body is decorated with various scars from unknown origin.
personality: Hebi personality mirrors the ability of Yoshi, he is calm, quite and is very polite. Although what lies beneath this humanoid form is the embodiment of Yoshi anger and regrets from his previous life. He talks in a much calmer way but would not hesitate to attack Yoshi when he sees him. When Yoshiro visit his inner world the skies darken from the horizon and rain start to pour down around the field, vegetations around it withers. Hebi would attack his host without a doubt but fortunately majority of this attack can be keep at bay by Orochimaru, Yoshi’s zanpakuto spirit.
hollow mask: The hollow mask that represent Hebi has a pattern that look similar to a snake head, two oval bright yellow eyes and a flat lip with two fangs bearing from it. The mask itself is triangular in shape and has a couple of horns on top of the eyes.
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HISTORY: The Beginning Nushiyama Yoshirou was born as a member of a royal family in the times of feudal Japan; he is the 13th son of the Nushiyama Yoshirou family. Although he was born in a royal family, the other family member treat him harshly since his mother, was just a farmer child. Especially his step brothers who occasionally beats him because he do something wrong. At the age of 14, his mother died due to his father abusive behavior. This changed his personality as he tries to avenge his mother. When he turns 16, Yoshi lured his father into a trap. Using his father meeting to pour a poison extracted from a snake to his drink. Not only that, Yoshi also trigger an explosion in the dorm where his step brothers lives. He watches as all of them burn to ashes from afar… and somehow, he doesn’t feel remorse for them.
The Momentary End After running away from his hometown, Yoshi joined the army since he doesn’t have anywhere else to go. He lacks the physical prowess to become a soldier, that’s why he was turned into a scout instead. Even though there is no way he would be in the front line fighting, he always trains his swordsmanship. When he was at the age of 20, he was sent on a mission to scouts an enemy base with a squad that consists of 8 members. He was appointed the leader of the group in the mission by their commander. As they arrive there and extract all the information that they need, a group of enemy troops ambushes them. Being outnumbered by hundreds, Yoshi makes a dramatic decision. He decided to kill his teammates and says that they were better off dead rather than alive to be interrogated and leaks the information about their army. He was then taken as a slave by the enemy, tortured by whips and swords and the occasional events of poison drinking, Yoshi ends up with a sword to his heart as he attacked a guard on his way to the execution platform. He was turned into a plus and shortly was transferred to Rukongai by the local shinigami.
The Second Beginning Shortly after he was reborn, Yoshi was founded in a small hut in Rukongai’s 61 districts. He suffered from hunger everyday due to his immense amount of reaitsu. Till one day he was founded by an old man with scars around his body. Later he found out that the man was none other than Genryuusai Yamamoto, whom at that time was walking around Rukongai. The old man than advice him to put his power into good use and joins the academy to train it. Which Yoshi agreed to do.
Life In The Academy Yoshi enrolled at the Academy soon after, he was alienated by the other not just because he was from the 61st district but also because he was a perverted and sadistic guy. Even though he lack of social life during the academy, he excels in sword combats and is the top of his class when it comes to Kidou, especially Hado, simply explaining it as a way to destroy things that get in his way. After that, he excels in the art of binding too, which is Bakudo. There are a couple of things that Yoshi seems to be lack of skills at which is fist to fist combat and the art of healing.
Joining the Kido Corps Due to his excellence skills on Kido, he was recruited to the ranks of the kido corps, the youngest of his class to be recruited into the Kido Corps as soon as he graduated from the academy. He spent most of his services here from time to time, seeing the rise and fall of the Gotei 13 from time to time. Due to the nature of the Kido Corps, Yoshi spent most of his times in his own office researching and experimenting different potent of Kido that the Shinigami could use. He is rarely seen outside of his confines and still lacks the social life as he did in the academy.
The Hollowfication Reports of various Shinigami teams being killed by mysterious forces had drawn the attention of the entire Kido Corps. Yoshiro was among the dispatched team of 4 people who is assigned to investigate. As they arrive at the location, the killer showed itself as a reptilian like hollow. Since the entire member of the dispatched team was a member of the Kido Corps, Yoshi was the only one capable of using the full potential of his zanpakuto. Telling the other to run away if they want to life as he activates his Shikai and blocks the hollow from attacking his teammates. When one of his squad mate decided to man up and faces the hollow, the hollow turn his attention toward her and attacked her. Yoshi leaps in front of the girl before the attack and he was bitten by the hollow on his left arm. Reinforcement swiftly comes as Yoshi fell to the ground to his wounds. When he wakes up, the hollow was already taken care of and his friends are secured. His succumbing wounds suddenly began the hollowfication process, and it began to rampage around. He was successfully apprehended by the Kido Corps and was taken for detentions and studies. He was held for a hundred years in custody to be studied and so that they could find a cure to destroy the abomination inside of Yoshiro. Only a handful amount of people in the Kido Corps knew what happened to Yoshi, the news of his hollowfication reaches the captain commander after he was released from custody.
Joining Gotei 13 Captain Commander Yamamoto decided that to keep Yoshi in arms reach, he was appointed as a captain of the third squad after the defeat of Aizen. Yoshirou wasn’t too fond of moving from the Kido Corps to the Gotei 13, although he is gleeful that he is in charge of interrogations and founding information which he is really good at. Hopefully, his time on the prestige Gotei would allow him to acquires friends and led a new adventure for him in the future.
RP SAMPLE:Still cheering in happiness to Matsumoto success with his jutsu training, Oji then walk slowly toward Matsumoto who was standing in disbelieve that he made it in just one try. “Done with your little celebration?” Oji said with a relaxed look on his face, folding his hand as Matsumoto start cleaning up his scrolls to the bag that he borrow from Oji to carries his goods and some food. Taking a deep breath before he replied to Oji “Yeah, I know… We still got till sunset to train, let continues on” wiping his head slowly with the sleeve of his cloth.
“Let see what technique should I learn next” Pouring up some stuff from his bag to look for another jutsu that he can train. And so he picks one of the most interesting one and the easiest one that he can learn, which is solid object stopping. Reversed from the gas thingy, Matsumoto thinks that stopping a solid object is easier and simple then the other things. “How about this one, it’s a bit simpler than the other jutsu” opening the scrolls and let Oji take a look at it.
“Solid object stopping… hmm, this one will be interesting” Scratching his chin as he said this, not sure if he’ll do a great help on this one too. “Yup! The first clan jutsu that I learn is actually is object stopping technique so I pretty much know the basic” he explained with a smile on his face, remembering the old days back when his Grandfather use to teaches him strictly and slap his head if he do it wrong, the sound of him yelling still haunt his head like it just happen yesterday.
“Well then, let’s not waist our time, what do you want me to do?” Oji said as he put his straw hat on top of his head to cover it from the heat. Taking a moment to think of what the routine hes going to do, maybe it is better to use the same method that he just use to train the last jutsu. “I think we should do something like the last time, you shooting out something solid on me and I try to stop it” he said explaining it thoroughly to Oji again.
“Okay then, let’s do this again” The old man said with an enthusiast tone toward Matsumoto. Going back to the other side of the field, looking for a giant rock or something like that since he doesn’t want to waist his chakra just to throw some earth element jutsu to defenseless Matsumoto who seems not intending to dodge any of the attack that Oji threw at him.
After a while looking for one, he finally found one that have the perfect size for this training. Waving to Matsumoto just to signal him to be ready for the incoming attack, “Be ready kid” with one single tug of the stone, Oji jerks out the rock from the ground holding it with two hands. His body shakes a little as he held the rock just above his head; it takes a man with inhuman strength to lift this couch sized rock and Oji was a man of strength, there is almost nothing that he can lift with his strength.
Taking a few step forward and then throw the rock forward with a mighty primal roar comes out from his mouth, on the other side of the field Matsumoto watches in awe as the rock flying in the air coming directly at him. There is no time to be awed by the great sigh of the rock, he must act quickly now before it hits the ground and pound him down to the ground. Here goes nothing saying it as he take a nice deep breath.
The still active todomeru me on his eye glows once again as he gaze toward the rock thrown at him to try and stop it. In order to focus, Matsumoto first clear his mind from any other thought, only focusing to stop the rock with his doujutsu. Ignoring any distraction like sound, voices and other objects and stare toward the flying rock intensively, not thinking of any possibilities to be pounded, killed or any other things that can happen to him if this does not work. C’mon, you can do this…
“C’mon Matsu!! You can do it!!” from afar, Oji cheers for Matsumoto, trying to encourage him more so he can do this one. Still, Matsumoto didn’t hear it since he was trying to focus on the incoming rock thrown at him that possibly can end his own life right now. The rock coming toward him in his eyes, seems like slowing down rate by rate as it coming closer toward him but somehow its create an illusion that it become bigger and bigger as the gap getting smaller.
Matsumoto even does not dare to take a simple blink of an eye since its can cause him a life if he misses this one, he cannot bare to just even think to what can happen to him if he misses or the rock cannot be stop. But that wasn’t his goal… he is doing this not to fail, but to success, his pupil began to widen as the rock come closer till the gap between them is just a few feet left.
He tries to stop the rock just like he stop smaller object before, and slowly the object began to stop. And then, its freezes in mid air, its seems like everything is stopped in an instance. Matsumoto closes his eye as the object stopped, and as he open it again his eye look normal again, saving the todomeru me power for another day. He lean back on the grass of field with a smile “Phew, That was close” he muttered.
Another day has past and Matsumoto was already moving on to his next location, leaving the old man Oji and heads toward the Bear Country. On his journey there, he manages to find a cottage for him to stay for a while, even though it was a bit dusty and seems to be falling apart any minute’s right after he enters it. Putting his bag of stuff to a nearby table as he heads toward a waterfall near the abandoned cottage he just found. Matsumoto also brings a scroll that he bought in his way toward the Bear Country from an old merchant, trying to learn another new technique which can make him stronger when the time comes to fight his father.
As he arrives at the waterfall, he looks around the sight of the water falling noticing how beautiful it is. He also spotted a rock in the middle of the waterfall which really suite for him to train his next clan techniques. Taking off his cloth while leaving his shorts and his mask on as he take a dib on the waterfall to test if it’s cold or not. After a few minutes of dipping and relaxing himself in the water to clean himself, Matsumoto heads toward the rock in the middle of the waterfall to start his training.
He started to meditate slowly as he closes both of his eyes while the water raining down upon him; somehow clearing his mind of his bad thought and tries to goes deeper to his personal tranquil state of mind. He was about to learn a new liquid stopping techniques, which method whos his grandfather told him about when he was training him back in the days of him being a village shinobi. The main purpose of this training method is to relax the trainee and focuses his or her mind to a tranquil state so it will be easier for them to try and stop the water without hurting them at the same time.
The calm and breezy cold water which raining down on him is making him a bit more peaceful, his mind slowly clearing and he was on his tranquil state. Remembering the thing that happen in the past and everything that makes him what he is right now. His eyes was closed tightly as he began focusing his mind back on his training again, activating the todomeru me trying to focuses his mind to stop the water from raining down on him vastly.
Thoughts start coming on his mind slowly as the haunting of the past go through his mind once again. “I’ve killed those people… I wonder what was running through my mind back then… when I killed those people” question started running through his mind about what he has done when he left the villages, killing those innocent villagers and shinobi whom only want to help Matsu out of his misery. “But… That face on her cold body…” he grunted, his eyes spread wide open again as he was a bit traumatized about remembering the past with his mother and all. The water around him still does not stop at all, its look like he need to do something better than this to success in training this stopping techniques.
Once again after taking a deep breathes and readjusts his senses, Matsumoto tries to clear his mind of all thought. Closing his eyes first, and then opens it like a bullet as he activates the todomeru me once again in attempt to learn the new clan technique. He focuses his mind on one thing for now… stopping the waterfall. Matsumoto focused hardly but he can only stop about a size of dining table of water, it was not enough to stop the full capacity of the jutsu he was learning about. So once again he closes his eyes and then tries to do it again like before, activating his clan doujutsu as he began focusing on stopping the water again, this time more focus than he has been before. The sound of water splashing all around him as it fell to his body is all he can hear, and his vision was blurred by the water raining down in front of his eyes, his body slowly adapted to the coldness of the water… he can feel it now, that he can do this.
Matsumoto focuses again, “C’mon!” he constantly yelled to himself in his thought as he tries to stop the water. Somehow because of the tranquility, thought started passes him again in his mind like before. Images from his past about his mother and his family, the great times they had together over and over again. This started to slowly calm down Matsumoto more, inhaling and exhaling steadily as he focuses with his todomeru me getting widen as he tries to stop the water rushing down on him for the third and final time since he was sure that he can do it without any difficulties.
And like he thought, the water pouring down around him slowly stopped second by second as he tries to focuses more than before to stop more water than his last try. His mind was clearly empty and was only focused to one thing… which is to success at this training without any further difficulties. The ranges of water that he is stopping widen and get wider by second until it reaches the size of a Christmas tree. Just like that, he has manages to stop the water and his training one can say was successful. He is now stronger than before and is ready to take on challenges up on his way again. Matsumoto viciously smiles as he let the water moves again, pouring down on him. CLASS/LEVEL:do not fill this out until you are given your class and level by staff. STATS:do not fill this out until you are given your class and level by staff.
Who am i? Im just another imagination of someone CBOX/OOC NAME:Clarion OTHER CHARACTERS:None At The Moment |
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Post by Ellie on Jul 11, 2013 2:31:46 GMT -5
First, I'm not sure if the Captain-Commander would be out and about in the Rukongai after he became Captain-Commander.
Second, you might want to go into more detail about his time in the Rukongai and/or Kido Corps. I might also ask you to change when he became hungry. Even powerful souls take a bit of time to really notice that they're a)hungry and b)actually need the food.
Third, I'd like to see a bit of consistency in your writing. No offense or anything, but your grammar and sentence structure switches frequently. In particular, you move a lot between verb tenses - present and past, etc. This makes it difficult to read through the profile - particularly the RP samples.
As it is, I can approve it for NV-0 with 45 points - which isn't high enough for captaincy. If you're okay with this, then add the class/level and stats to your profile. If you'd like to try again, please take my suggestions into consideration and I will regrade this profile.
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