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Post by Hiroto Akagi on Sept 21, 2013 21:44:38 GMT -5
For:Shikai Name: Black Hole Type:Defensive Cooldown:4 posts Cost: Medium Range: Ten foot radius from body Description: The blades of Tsuin no Paison begin to release a cloud of complete darkness. This surrounds Akagi and whomever should be in this ten foot radius. This technique focuses on the concept of black holes rather than the black holes themselves. Nothing can escape its grasp, not even light its self. Therefore, what ever is caught inside ceases to exist to outsiders. This cloud blocks sounds from being heard and even reiatsu from being felt by outsiders. Being a defensive technique, this move lasts two posts.
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Post by ✭Ulqui-chan on Sept 21, 2013 22:42:26 GMT -5
Black Hole: this needs a higher cost. Also not sure if you just haven't changed your app but this obviously isn't wind so if that's still your ability this isn't really possible.
Hebi Dane: as a completely melee based movement you don't need to list this as a tech. It doesn't really play into the darkness or wind ability anyway.
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Post by Hiroto Akagi on Sept 22, 2013 1:51:26 GMT -5
Problems fixed and yes my app has changed
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Post by ✭Ulqui-chan on Sept 22, 2013 2:14:36 GMT -5
Le Approved
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