Cheshire
Newbie
The Feline Riddler
Posts: 6
|
Post by Cheshire on Jul 21, 2013 23:31:36 GMT -5
Name: Chero ( AWWWWYEAAAAAH) Cost:1 post cool down with 1 use per post. if it's used 20 times in one thread (counting every time it is used, regardless of how many cool downs) from generally accumulated fatigue, cheshire must have a 10 post cool down. Range: long (80 meters) Description: Chero( Churo maybe?? Huehehe) is fired from the tail and is double the damage of a regular cero, but the radius of the cero is 10 feet, and is shot like a ray (imagine finger beams but from the tail). If the tail is pointed in a different direction, the cero will move along with it, almost as if the cero is like an extension of the tail (the cero is always straight).
|
|
|
Post by Ellie on Jul 21, 2013 23:47:27 GMT -5
When you say five times in a row, do you mean in a single post? Or five posts in a row? Because if you're firing off that many in a single post, I'll either a)want you to lower it to, like, 3 a post or b)ask you to up the cooldown for it. Also, 20 times in a single thread seems...like a huge amount, but I could be wrong. Admittedly, you balance it out well with that lengthy cooldown, so I'll probably let that part through.
So please clarify that "x times in a row" part and I'll look over this again. Thank you!
|
|
Cheshire
Newbie
The Feline Riddler
Posts: 6
|
Post by Cheshire on Jul 21, 2013 23:58:17 GMT -5
I have fixed Cheshire's Chero Churo Cero Chit.
|
|
|
Post by Ellie on Jul 22, 2013 1:27:22 GMT -5
Alright, between consulting previous custom ceros and hashing out my own thoughts with staff, I've got some more stuff I'd like to see fixed.
First, I'd like to see the cost bumped to medium since it moves with the tail and I'd like to see the range shortened to something like...50 to 80 meters? 500 seems massively long, even by my reckoning.
Second, I'd like the number of these per post to be cut to one per post with a one-post cooldown between firing. I think it'd be fine to keep the 20 shots per thread with the 10-post cooldown.
Lastly, please remove any mention of other Hollow cats using this. Since this custom cero is treated as a tech, only Chesire can use it.
|
|
Cheshire
Newbie
The Feline Riddler
Posts: 6
|
Post by Cheshire on Jul 22, 2013 1:40:38 GMT -5
Aye Cap', they're fixed naow.
|
|
|
Post by Ellie on Jul 22, 2013 2:05:52 GMT -5
|
|