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Post by Christian Lucian Argentum on Apr 8, 2013 4:50:13 GMT -5
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Christian Lucian Argentum Male | sexual orientation: Heterosexual | race: Arrancar ALIASES: The Wolf of Redemption AGE:963 years AGE OF APPEARANCE:23 NUMBER: 36, it's on the right side of his face, hidden by his mask although when the mask-jaws open, it can be seen. RANK: BASE FORM:Adjuchas
quote or lyrics here; not too long FACE CLAIM:HEIGHT:6’0”
WEIGHT:140 lbs
APPEARANCE: Christian gives off a distinctive cold presence, being able to cause the air to feel cold in a creepy, non-physical way just by being there. He has a lithe but fit figure with toned muscles. His face looks regal, almost royal in a way, but he has a vertical scar running down his right eye, right below the eye. His Mask Fragment takes up most of the right side of his head, starting from the end of his cheekbone and ending beyond his ears. It resembles the jaw of a wolf, which he was in his previous hollow forms. His hair is platinum in color, almost snow white with a very, very light bluish tinge to it, that gives him his unique look. His eyes are dark blue in a sapphire sense, always refracting in different shades of blue, and they can range from looking compassionate and gentle to predatory and intimidating. Because of his nature, Christian has perfected the art of ‘wolf-eyes’, being able to stare down at a person enough to intimidate almost anyone, even people stronger than him. His pupils, although round, can turn slit-like when he’s in combat or if he’s experiencing active emotions. His teeth are normal except for the fact that his canines seem a bit longer. Similar to his eyes, his canines and the incisors and premolars next to the canines lengthen and narrow into fangs whenever he’s experiencing an intense emotion, be it aggression or lust. His nails also turn into claw as well whenever his teeth change.
His hair is choppy, messy and windswept. His bangs are usually always covering his forehead, spiky and lazy in looks. His hair is longest behind, where he usually keeps it tied in a long tail that reaches down to mid-back. The hair on the left side of his head is also usually kept in a small tail, tied with narrow wrappings. His hollow hole is located in the middle of his chest. His Reiatsu color is different shades of blue.
quote or lyrics here; not too long LIKES: – Honor -Pride -Dignity -Training -Wolves [Canines in general, but wolves hold a special place] -Nature -Emotions
DISLIKES: –Hollows -The Espada -Togabito -Himself to an extent -Felines of all types -Dishonorable people/Scum -Being Weak
NEGATIVE TRAITS: Impulsive : Punch First, Ask Questions later, although not overly-raging or short-tempered. He tends to follow his instincts.
Dominative: Although he isn’t arrogant, he isn’t overly fond of people telling him what to do either. As the Alpha in his pack, he isn’t used to people trying to walk over him. If someone tells him to jump, he’d tell that someone to go do something anatomically impossible.
Untrusting: He tends to trust no one until he’s known someone for a long time in an intimate way, and even then he still does not trust them completely.
POSITIVE TRAITS: Pack Hunter: He’s good at fighting with other people who know how he fights.
Kind: Although he’s cold, he isn’t heartless. He has positive emotions and feelings and even helps those in need.
Honorable: He has a very good and true sense of morality, risking himself to save others, offering his opponents a second chance at life by sparing them, etc.
EXTRAS: None at the moment.
quote or lyrics here; not too long WEAPONS: Claws which are strong enough to tear through titanium, his fangs although they aren’t always used that much. He also has a mask made from a hollow’s head that allows him to hide his spiritual pressure completely when worn, although he can’t use most of his spiritual pressure. If he does, the mask discontinue's it's effect.
ZANPAKUTO:name: Fenrir
sealed form: It looks like a standard zanpakutou, 4 ft in length with a straight, white blade. The blade has a tiny gap running through it’s center laterally, which is filled with his reiatsu whenever he draws it to battle. The Hilt is covered with lightblue wrappings.
RESURRECCION:release command: HOWL, FENRIR!
description: Causes an explosion of blue-white energy to erupt from Fenrir, completely engulfing Christian in it. When the explosion disperses, he is revealed to be in a completely white outfit. The outfit resembles Coyote Stark’s outfit almost perfectly, except for the fact that he also has platinum armor in various parts of his body; On his shoulders, forearms, shins and chest, under his shirt. The Coat is less furry, although the fur near his neck is larger than Stark’s. His hair also becomes completely black, as well as his sclera. His irises become a pale shade of icy blue, which glow. His blade widens a bit and turns completely black, turning from a traditional Japanese straight sword into a western hybrid long/broad sword. The Word “Redemption” Is etched onto the blade in whatever language the beholder wishes to read it with. Every movement leaves behind a pale-blue motionblur, and each movement/swing of his blade is accompanied by a sound that resembles the howling winds, almost wolflike.
type: Shadow/Darkness
stat upgrades: 2 to REI. 2 to SEI. 4 to HOH
techniques: Name: Lobo Asalto [Wolf Assault] Type: Offensive Cost: Medium Range: Medium Range Description: Christian summons two spectral wolves out of his reiatsu, causing them to appear by his side. One of the wolves are white while the other is black. These wolves are slightly sentient and attack the targets that Christian designates for them. Their bites are very powerful and the wolves are very nimble and fast, but it takes only one solid and strong hit to cause one of them to dissipate. Once both of the wolves are dissipated, he needs 2 posts to be able to summon them again.
Name: Lobo Estallido [Wolf Burst] Type: Follow Up Offensive Cost: Low Range: Medium Description: A simple enough move, it's used after Christian has summoned his wolves. Whenever he thinks the situation is fruitful enough or it is the right time, such as when his wolves are latched onto an opponent or are in close proximity, he simply removes the stabilizers that cause his wolves to keep their form. This, in turn, causes the wolves to explode like grenades.
Name: Aullido de Sangre [Howl of Blood] Type: Offensive Cost: Low Range: Long Description: Christian lets out a nerve-racking, bone-chilling howl that releases a Shockwave. The howl has two effects. The First effect is that as soon as it is made, anyone who hears it will feel fear. Ranks higher than him will feel a twinge of fear while ranks lower than him will feel it in full, the fear getting more intense as the power difference inbetween Christian and his opponent. The main effect is that it causes any recent wounds or current wounds to reopen, causing them to bleed profusely for a post. Any wounds that might've closed up will reopen again. Cooldown is 5 posts.
Name: Veganza [Retribution] Type: Offensive Cost: High Range: Very Long Description: Christian pours his reiatsu into his blade, causing the blade to glow with black energy. He also pours all his emotions and thoughts into his attack, strengthening it. The stronger his thoughts and emotions, the stronger the attack. The attack is strongest when Christian is badly injured or if he's fighting to protect someone or any other intense emotion or thought. And then Christian selects a target for his attack.
Once the attack has charged, he slashes at an opponent. The blade will then pass through any armor or object in it's way to hit the target the attack is meant for. If he was to attack someone and the victim was to raise his blade, Christian's sword would pass right through the blade, along with any armor the opponent might be wearing. This attack can also pass through any living being that isn't the intended target of the attack. A great drawback of this attack is that it also disallows Christian the ability to block any incoming strikes from anyone/anything while this move is being made, as the attacks will pass right through his blade.
The attack can be dodged, but blocking it is extremely hard. It can only be blocked by energy moves stronger than it. [Opponents having energy attacks atleast 2 points stronger than Christian's SEI]
The cooldown for this move is 5 turns, and the number of times Christian can use it depends on his REI Stat. [4 REI = 1 time]
SEGUNDA ETAPA:note that you cannot start off with segunda etapa. It can be learned once the character reaches MT-2.
description: explain how the appearance of your character changes during segunda and their basic ability. It should build upon the appearance in resurreccion.
type: either list an element, or something else that clearly represents the abilities this character will gain in segunda etapa. Be aware that abilities do not stack (except stat changes), so all resurreccion techniques are replaced with the segunda etapa techniques upon release.
stat upgrades: which stats increase in res and by how much? Only fill this out after you have been given your class/level.
techniques: may have 4 to start. Register these through creation before adding them to your application.
QUOTE OR LYRICS HERE; NOT TOO LONG HISTORY: Christian Maximus Aurum Argentum was born to a noble, aristocrat family back in medieval times. He was always viewed with awe and respect because of his unusual hair color, thought to be an angel In the form of a child. His childhood was spent mostly in pampered harmony, although his father, who as a knight, had taught him everything about knighthood from the sense of morality to the honor of being one. When he was 7 years old, he got his first pet, a wolf-pup. He loved that wolf pup more than anything else. He and the wolf grew up together, training and refining their combat skills together. They spent almost all of their time together, one rarely ever seen without the company of the other. When Christian was 16, his father died in the war of kingdoms and he was left to protect and support his family. He enlisted in the knighthood and soon became one of the elite knights. When he was 24 years old, he was on the losing side of the war of kingdoms between his king's kingdom and a neighbouring kingdom. It was a fiery day, with smoke blackening the sky and an orange hellish glow surrounding him in all directions. Blood and corpses were more common than living beings. He had made his mother and his family run while he himself fought on the front lines. But though he fought valiantly, he knew they were losing. His brethren fell left and right, they were being pushed back rapidly… And then, someone parried his strike and did a riposte, stabbing him right through his chest. He expected to feel pain, but instead, he only felt a strange sense of peace. As he fell to his knees, his life slowly fading, he watched his wolf nuzzle him before running off into the forest, off to protect his family. But then, he looked infront of him. A huge shape was slowly materializing from the shadows, becoming more clear and defined as he died. Finally, as he came out of his body, he saw the huge demon in it’s full glory. Without weapons or powers, he was easy pickings for the hollow… ** When the hollow became a Gillian, that Is when he found his opportunity. He seized it, shoving every single soul In the hollow to seize control. He managed to achieve sentience and he then wandered, doing what all Hollows did to satisfy their hunger. But he wasn’t mindless anymore. He spent most of his life devouring other hollows, especially other Menos as they were already made of hundreds of souls. How much time had passed was meaningless to him, but eventually, he became an adjuchas. Unsurprisingly, he was in the form of a large wolf. He hunted, howling after each hunt as a way to honor his long lost life and wolf friend. Drawn by the howling, other wolf-like adjuchas soon joined him. They made a pack, hunting and growing strong together. Eventually, they decided that they didn’t like the life of a hollow any longer. Having his mask torn off was one of the most pleasurable and painful things Christian had ever experienced. He screamed like he had never screamed before, almost roaring up at the moon. His body screamed in agony and joy, morphing and changing as his bones crumbled and reformed, repeating the process in an endlessly painful way. But everything felt so right. After what seemed like an eternity, he stood up on his own legs, finally looking like he did back when he was alive. The only differences were the remainders of his hollow mask on the side of his face and the huge hole in the middle of his chest. His pack had also done the same, although not most of them survived through it. With that done, they began to aimlessly journey in one direction. Soon, they sighted the gargantuan structure that is Las Noches. Curious, they came closer to inspect the structure. As they did come close upon it, Christian was shocked to find more Arrancars. But unlike him and his pack, these Arrancars were…. Primitive. Brutal. Chaotic. They were simply evil creatures, demon like, how did whatever they pleased. The thought sickened him and his group and so they decided to remain factionless. And that is how Christian came into being near Las Noches present day. RP SAMPLE: Nearly breaking into an amused snigger at the newly-returned lady assassin's seconding of Deisuke's statements, Yuri chose to hide her unladylike mocking gesture behind a soft clearing of her throat instead as she raised one arched brow up high. Shrugging uncaringly while looking down the long black table, she then trained her eyes on the quiet blue-haired Serina who was busily tapping away on her self-customized laptop then softly said, "I heard that the survivors are recruiting and that there's fresh blood. I believe they've set themselves up to be some sort of support group called The Resistance?" She ignored the now incensed assassin as he rose up and stormed off almost exactly the same way Miss Kiara had only moments before he made his 'grand' entrance. Motioning to the tall guards to let the emotionally reactive young man be, Yuri then continued addressing the remaining five skilled mercenaries in the conference chamber as the shiny reflective glass doors slid to a close behind Deisuke's exit. "Is this true then? I want you to gather information on them. How long has this been going? How many have they gathered to them? Who are the leaders? Where do they meet?"Pursing her shapely lips in bored disregard of the recent dramatic threat the ladykiller Deisuke had thrown her way, she then discussed further,"And I honestly don't give a whiff of what your hotshot top dog just said, bring me back this Alexia alive. Personally, to me. That is, if you manage to infiltrate the Resistance. I do not care about your power struggles here in the MCAD but someone actually pays for us to do the jobs so be sure to do them well."
Turning her head with a look of challenge to the observant male assassin, Yuri then held up a small piece of what seemed to be crumpled paper then queried,"Seen you this before, Mr. Alexander?' Dropping it into a clear ashtray behind her then quickly fishing for a lighter from inside the depths of her right pocket, she set fire to it then calmly watch it burst into hot flames. Lifting her glittering hazel eyes once more to Kumori, she then said in gentle tones, "Can you promise me to make sure Deisuke hears of this, Ms. Kumori? I think this would interest him greatly considering the fact that his sister is with them. He might still recover her from their side and we would be able to use the intelligence she has collected from them over the time she spent in their camps.' Slowly feeding another piece of yellowed crumpled paper to the slowly dying blaze, Yuri then continued in a rather solemn tone, "It has been rumored that they have an informant. We'd like to know who that is. Which one of you would be willing to handle this assignment? Except Serina of course, I'd like you stay behind for there is a matter I wish to discuss with you, especially." She tilted her delicate face downwards as her way of inquiring whether the organization's tech super brain was alright with her request then added,"I'd be glad if you would accept the proposition since no one else but you could handle it, what with your technological skills." Yuri finished smoothly then awaited the smart young woman's verdict to her statement. Settling silently once more into the soft cushion of the costly leather swivel seat at the head of the shiny black table, Yuri then allowed herself a momentarily amused chuckle that sounded more venomous than entertained as she twirled a red pawn between her slender lily-like fingers. Looking up at the lean, clear-eyed assassin who was now giving her the rather threatening eye, she placed the chess piece in the very middle of the mental mind game fray she was playing and firmly answered, "As a matter of fact, Miss Orphe. It is not. Neither is it going to be about me, as some would conclude it were." She then shot a slightly narrowed gaze at the sleek and curvaceous mercenary who nonchalantly kneed one of the huge bouncers at the glass doors for his courage to step into her path. Forming her hands into her signature steeple pose, she then continued with lowered eyes,"Of course, I do want to acquaint myself with all of you. It would be a great pleasure to be familiar with all of my colleagues for my father does think of you all so very highly." At this praise, the left corner of Yuri's lips tugged slowly up into a mischievous grin. "But formalities aside, I am here to inform you of a little, shall we say, competition for all you assassins. Something to spice up the job when it gets too boring for you all," She raised her hazel eyes to all of them, scanning the room with a very telling glint in her eyes. She was then about to launch into a presentation concerning the tournament when she remembered David asking her the purpose of the very existence of their organization. Turning her hollow gaze onto the man, she then softened her expression with a warm smile and smoothly told him,"Why David dear, we do what we do for the same reason a vendor does what he does. Money. To survive. This is only business, no personal issues." She shrugged her shoulders then picked up a small bamboo pen that was lying down beside the glass chessboard she had been utilizing for the past hour then continued casually as if she had been talking of tomatoes and potatoes,"And trust me, innocent is the last word you'd wish to use in describing these...people." She finished with a wrinkle of her small nose to show her disgust. Her eyebrow then arched up a bit when he started fidgeting rather suspiciously with his battle gear. Swiveling swiftly in her seat to face him, she then eyed him critically whilst addressing her next statement at the other assassins,"Which reminds me. AND WHERE, pray tell, is this Alexia? How come no one has brought her in yet?" She then sat up rod straight and a haughty look of displeasure slid onto her face. "Isn't she the sibling of one of the assassins? Where is he?" The formerly low volume of her gentle voice rose up just the minimal pitch before she accidentally snapped the pen she had in her hands cleanly in half. She then started massaging her temples in frustration before opening her eyes once more to steer the discussion back to the main reason for the gathering. "As I was saying. I shall be having a nice little contest for all of you, whoever gets the most targets in the shortest time with the least damages to themselves wins. And becomes my second-in-command." She smiled and rested her hands on the polished surface in front of her and put on a rather malicious yet triumphant smile. "So? Think you can handle it?"
CLASS/LEVEL:AV-2 STATS:HAN: 10 REI: 16 +2 HAK: 10 SEI: 16 +2 BUK: 12 HOH: 12 +4 Points Earned: 0 Total points:76
QUOTE OR LYRICS HERE; NOT TOO LONG CBOX/OOC NAME:Crucifixion OTHER CHARACTERS:Daniella Faeara Avalon – Squad 6 Lieutenant - Shinigami |
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Post by Ellie on Apr 8, 2013 14:13:12 GMT -5
Appearance: you first call him Christian and then later on call him Sebastian. It's just a nit-pick thing, but if you could fix that that'd be awesome.
Weapons: For his "mask made from a hollow's head," I would like you to either have it hide his spiritual pressure completely with the caveat being that he can't use most of his spiritual energy OR change it so that it simply distorts his pressure, making it somewhat difficult to determine his actual strength.
History: What war was he involved in while alive? Either be specific just say it was "a war." Same thing with the end of his history. In this instance, I'd suggest just removing any mention of a war, since Hueco Mundo has perpetually been at war with Soul Society.
Once you've made this changes, post here to let us know and I'll give you my final verdict. ^__^
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Post by Ellie on Apr 8, 2013 14:26:24 GMT -5
Approved for AV-2 with 76 points.
You can go ahead and fill out the fields: class/level, stats, and stat upgrades for Resurreccion. Once you're done, comment here so that we can check them over, and this will be moved to accepted.
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