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Post by Nishimura Shoko on Nov 13, 2013 3:12:11 GMT -5
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sex: Female | sexual orientation: Straight| race: Shinigami ALIASES:None AGE:240 AGE OF APPEARANCE:24. SQUAD:12 RANK:4th seat
quote or lyrics here; not too long FACE CLAIM:Kanon -- Mai Kawasumi
HEIGHT:157 cm (5'2")
WEIGHT:45 kg (99 lbs)
APPEARANCE:She has blue eyes and black hair up to her waist. She wears a red ribbon in her hair with long ends and bells at the ends. She also has a necklace with a dragon charm around her neck. Nishimura has a scar running down the left side of her face that she got from her father. Nishimura also has an armband with a wolf charm.She wears a red shirt with a black skirt. She also wears long black socks with black flat shoes. When she goes to school she wears a white shirt with a maroon skirt and white socks with black shoes. Formal cloths is normally a red dress with a V-cut and silver shoes. Or a blue dress with silver shoes and with both dresses a silver necklace with a rose. She sometimes wear blue denim pants with a yellow shirt and white flat shoes.
She changes her hair to two ponytails with black ribbons with no bells and she takes the dragon necklace and the wolf charm bracelet of and wears a red dress with a white shoulder jacket that has a blue line at the bottom and is fastened with a blue ribbon. The red dress has a white line on the bottom and she wears brown shoes with black knee high socks. She also change her outfits most of the time.
Outfits:
1:A blue midriff top with dark blue trim and pale yellow sleeves with blue jeans that have stars on the bottom of the legs. Her shoes are yellow wedge-sandals.
2:A blue and white striped midriff top with small pink hearts and a ruffly denim skirt. She also wears a pink arm-band on her left arm and over-the-knee blue socks. Her shoes are dark blue platform boots with white tips and pink laces.
3:Nishimura wears a pink top with white polka-dots and a blue heart emblem at the top with a puffy blue skirt with a yellow belt and a pink and white polka-dot bow on it. Her shoes are pink heels with white polka-dots with a blue ankle strap and a yellow ribbon on her toes.
4:Nishimura wears a pink shirt with a blue bodice and blue hearts at the waist with one strap at the top of her shoulder and one strap below her shoulder. She wears a blue necklace with pearls and a blue ribbon. She wears a blue skirt with above the knee pink socks and blue wrinkled boots. Her hair is pinned back and has a small bang from the corner of her head with a barrette pulling her hair back.
5:Consists of a green midriff, off-the-shoulder top with puff sleeves, a fuchsia colored, faux wrap, short skirt decorated with strawberries, two sets of yellow bangle bracelets on each arm, and fuchsia colored platform sandals.
6:Is a pink midriff shirt with a pink-trim, puffy sleeves with pink polka-dots, a red skirt with maroon shorts on under her skirt, pink socks, and red platforms shoes. Like Tecna, she wears earrings, specifically golden loops.
7:She wears a pink, white and green sundress in a floral print with pink and green heels.
8:Nishimura wears a pink, soft jagged edged, sleeveless shirt with a grass green vest. She also wears a sharp edged fuchsia skirt with a pink belt, and some green and white stripes. Her hair is a looped ponytail decorated with a lime green bow .She wears long fuchsia socks with lime edges with green high-heeled shoes.
Formal outfits:
1:Nishimura wears a light blue dress with double straps on each side and a slit down the sides. She wears light blue sandals with one strap over her feet.
2: She wears a light blue ruffle dress that reaches the floor with a pink ruffle layer over it starting at the waist, also at the waist starts another layer that is coral blue and sparkly, from the top to waist she has pink flowers on her dress. She also wears a blue necklace with a gem, light blue elbow gloves, and one blue three-gem earring. Her hair is in a twisted bun-like up style with a light blue crown that holds it. Her eye shadow is light pink.
3: Nishimuras' dance formal outfit is a yellow dress with dark blue flowers going up from her waist to the top of her dress. She wears matching yellow boots.
4: Nishimura wears a white floor-length dress with a sea green layer over the dress with white straps and light purple flowers along the waist. She also wears a neon green necklace with her sea green and teal seashell barrette. Her hair is down.
Pajamas: Nishimuras' pajamas consist of a pink and cream colored top with green hearts where the straps meet the actual top and blue frills at the bottom of the top. She also wears cream colored shorts with small pink stripe above some more blue frills and a pink bow with a green center. She also wears two green fuzzy wristbands. She wears socks that go from her ankles to her knees. They are green at the top and the bottom and have pink and blue stripes in between. Her shoes are blue heels with furry pink tips. Her hair is also in two braids with a pink headband with a green bow.
Her body build is slim but slight muscular due to all of the abuse her body had to take and the work she did in the house of hell and has a light complexion. She has some bruises as well from her fathers' "fun" activities and from the whip her mother uses on her if she didn't so as she was told. She is usually seen carrying her European-style sword because she feels weak without it.
quote or lyrics here; not too long LIKES:1. Writing - She loves writing a lot because it makes feel free in a way. She writes a lot of stories in her free time and also likes to publish them (When she was alive). She might have lost her passion to wright but she still likes it.
2. Drawing - Just like writing except she doesn't draw common things like dogs. She draws swords and other types of fantasy stuff and even in her soul reaper form she still likes to draw but keep it to herself. She's not good at it but loves it none the less.
3. Playing guitar - Nishimura used the guitar to escape her reality of her parents and school. Her parents didn't like it though but she managed to get them to agree somehow. She's alright while playing the instrument but not a professional.
4. Singing - One thing she loves to do the most is singing even though she sings falsely that someone would kill himself and doesn't care about it.
5. Animals - Nishimura loves animals even though she is cold and distant. She at least knows that animals don't understand her and sometimes talks to them like they are a friend. She just does it to get the load of her shoulders.
6. Winter - Her favourite season out of all four of them.
7. Fruits - She doesn't like all of them but she still eats most of it like crazy and is mostly what she gets to eat for breakfast, lunch and dinner.
8. Snow - She loves playing in the snow. It's the only time when she is actually happy for once in her life.
9. Rain - Only because it takes the warm sun away.
10. Music - It relaxes that sore body of hers when she lies down and just listens to it. She hardly gets to do it though.
11. Research & developing - Her love for research and developing other stuff is something she can never let go of but of coarse her parents intervened forbidding her from doing so.
DISLIKES: 1. Huge crowds - Nishimura is used to being alone and because of thay she hates a lot of people in one place. She loves isolated places and keeps her distance. Place like the mall is something she would avoid unless she really has no choice and would be quick to get out of there.
2. Snakes - Like everyone else, she hates snakes. Mainly because they are slithery and can kill you. She will hate people that keep snakes for pets. Poisonous or not.
3. Spiders - These are a one way ticket to hell for her. Spiders are her least favorite insects inline with snakes. She'll kill them right on the spot whether they can kill you or not and if you want to be killed by Nishimura this is the way to go and is the same with the snakes.
4. Drugs - Nishimura commonly hates them mainly because they can screw up your life in more ways than just one. If she could she would get rid of it all so it doesn't exist anymore even if she know it is impossible to do so.
5. Alcohol - Feels the same way about drugs and would do the same, to get rid of it. The main reason though is because her father drinks a lot when he had a bad day.
6. Going shopping - Yes, she hates it and not because of the huge crowds. She just doesn't like it and besides her parents rarely lets her out of the house anyway.
7. Tidying her Bedroom - Who doesn't hates this? Nishimura cleans her bedroom usually through force and abuse from her parents but she really hates it and sometimes leaves her room a mess on purpose just to get her parents mad at her.
8. Arguing - She does this 24/7 with her parents most of the time. They don't believe her when she tells the truth about her whereabouts and it always escalates.
9. Summer - Yup, she hates summer since the day she was born. Summer is always to hot for her and hates it completely.
10. School - Even if she gets good grades she still hates it because it's ruling her life because of her parents.
NEGATIVE TRAITS:1. Aggressive - She's aggressive because of her parents and it also reflects in her battles.
2. Violent - She loves fighting but is violent in battle. Seeing her enemies torn apart and bleed to death gives her satisfaction.
3. Vengeance - She wants revenge on her parents for abusing her and for making her into a slave and also breaking her resolve.
4. Callous - Nishimura is cold and distant toward people and she hardly shows anything towards anyone. Thanks to her parents for this she seems emotionless everyday no matter what happens and is cold towards her enemies as well.
5. Weak-willed - Because her parents broken her resolve, Nishimura is very weak to so anything like standing up for herself and because of that she has a weak will to do anything about that.
6. Mean - Nishimura does have a mean look on her face but it doesn't mean that she will treat you that way. She will if you are mean to her.
POSITIVE TRAITS:1. Adventurous - This is one thing Nishimura loves the most especially if it is outdoors.
2. Determined - This is one trait that shows almost all of the time. The will to get revenge on her parents.
3. Helpful - Dispite the fact that she is cold hearted she still loves to help other out.
4. Hard-working - This is one trait that Nishimura keeps on doing almost everyday. Working hard is what got her the position she wanted.
5. Persistent - This is one trait her enemies would hate because she doesn't give up until they are dead at her feat whether she dies in the process or not.
6. Quiet - It is rare that she ever talks unless someone asked a question or if she gets mad at you.
EXTRAS:Flaws: 1. Phobic - Snakes & spiders. She hates them and would try to kill them on the spot when she sees them as for snakes she'll just run for the hills. This is one way to get Nishimura to kill you on the spot or mad at you for weeks.
2. Withdrawn - It's not that she's friendly, she just keeps to herself. Blame her parents for this one. Her parents need for good grades keeps her from having fun and inside the house even if she manage to have a little bit of time outside.
3. Tongue-tied - Because of keeping to herself she rarely talks.It's also because she rarely has friends and even if she had friends she still wouldn't talk unless things are important. Maybe someone could change this.
4. Callous - Nishimura is cold and distant toward people and she hardly shows anything towards anyone. Thanks to her parents for this she seems emotionless everyday no matter what happens and is cold towards her enemies as well.
Habits: 1. Doing the air guitar - Because she likes playing guitar she has the habit of doing it without the actual guitar. she sometimes doesn't even notice it.
2. Making animal sounds - Nishimura loves animals and makes there sounds though she doesn't get it right. It's the little time outside that brings out this habit and she's not planning to stop anytime soon with this habit.
3. Singing - Yes singing. Though she sings very falsely she doesn't stop but she does make sure that no one can hear her. Reason being that she's scared someone might kill himself/herself just to stop hearing her.
4. Constant eater - She eats constantly because of her parents and also the food makes her feel better but she hardly gains weight because of all the abuse and slave work.
Fears: 1. Meeting her parents again - Nishimura fears that her death is just a dream and that she might wake up to her nightmare when she was alive, her parents. She fears it might happen and that everything she experienced is then gone and her life of abuse continues. Well she might plan her own death then but what if she just returns to that hell again?
Goals: 1. To stop eating as much as she does because of her parents. - She really wants to stop eating her problems away. She knows she's not gaining weight but who knows it might happen someday.
2. Get revenge on her parents for abusing her. Who doesn’t - Abused just because her parents doesn't want her is really unfair in Nishimura's books. She wants to get back at them so they can see how hurt and abused she felt.
3. Maybe change her cold personality which might not happen. - This is more the goal her zanpakutou wants Nishimura to take on. Nishimura is lonely and her zanpakutou wants her to have a happy life which is what Nishimura should have now that is free from her parents.
4. To get her resolve back that her parents broke and stand up for herself in situations.
Overall Personality: Nishimura is cold and keeps her distance from others. Nishimura hardly has friends and mostly keeps to herself. She mostly doesn’t talk to anyone except when answering a question the teachers asked. She loves the outdoors and hikes most of the time and also climbs trees. She spends a lot of time outside and loves to hear animal sounds. Nishimura studies most of the time due to her parents wishes of good grades although she doesn't like it. She sometimes gets teased and bullied about it. Due to her parents wish she hardly has time for a relationship or a social life. She doesn't talk at all to people and likes to be alone most of the time. She even studies alone and doesn't talk to others in class. She focuses mostly on school work and shies away from others. She even hides her emotions form everyone including her family. Nishimura loves to read books even if it is her own school books. She reads when she finds or has time and finishes a book in a week.
She has a love for research and development. She loves to make stuff although her parents forbid her saying that it's stupid and she will be mocked. The real reason was that they were afraid that she might make something that could help her escape.
She is like Sylvanas Windrunner because both have been tortured and they also like to tear their enemies apart. That might not be the only common things between them as they both like fighting very much and never gives up in a fight. They both also have been made fools of through the ones that tortured them. Seeing her enemies bleed to death gives her great joy and satisfaction. Nishimura is also a loner because she's mostly on her own. She might hate it when she gets teased about it but ignores it most of the time. She also hates the boys in her school mainly because they are jerks towards her. She is also known for having the icy stare that keeps people away from her and she appears to show no emotion even if she's alone.
Her resolve to so anything like stand up for herself is broken by her parents abuse. She is quite and obeys their rules to the letter even if she hates them; she also sadly has no choice. She mostly hates what her father uses her for and knows that it's not right. She badly hates them both that if she could, she would have already torn them to bloody shreds. Nishimura has been betrayed by friends and people very close to her that she has hardened her heart and became cold and distant from people. Since their betrayal she has never come to trust anyone ever again and only trusts her zanpakutou. She is very doubtful now and her zanpakutou hope that someone can change this and make her a happy girl. Nishimura also is not very good at the game Shiritori (Which is a Japanese game. The person who says a word ending with an N loses).
Don’t be fooled by the cold stare because under it all she has a kind heart. She just hides it because of the betrayal and her parents. Under the cold she is a nice person who always wants to help out. She is very careless. She isn’t afraid of heights and very fond of sweets. Nishimura is motivated, for the most part, by revenge and makes little distinction between friend and foe. She strongly believes in the value of honor, and in a fair fight. If anything Nishimura is not like her parents at all. She will put her life in danger for others to save theirs, which she doesn’t hesitate to do at all including in battle and outside of it.
quote or lyrics here; not too long WEAPONS:None
ZANPAKUTO:name: Kōri ryū (Translation - Ice Dragon)
sealed form: Sealed form: In her sealed for it looks like and ordinary sword with a gold hilt. Not really much to her sealed form. It only has a golden hilt and a silver blade. No impressions at all and Nishimura wears it on her back.
spirit: Apperance [ Kōri ryū has long blue hair with blue eyes and a white dress. Her hair goes up to her feet. Her dress is a one strap dress that is a little bit below the shoulder. Top of the dress has triangles with blue dots under them. The rest of the dress is in blue and white frill layers and the last one has snowflakes sticking out of bottom of the last layer.
In her dragon she looks like a Chinese dragon and has a red diamond on her forehead. She has blue eyes and from her head are ice diamonds that forms down her body up to her front legs. For the rest of her body she has fins on her back.
inner world: Nishimura's inner world is cold, covered with ice and snow. There are mountains and streams along with a waterfall with ice cold water and has a huge ice ring in the middle of her inner world where Nishimura uses to ice skate. There are also trees made out of ice around the ice ring.
The Frost Tower is a floating mass of ice with spires sprouting from its base. One spire extends into a tower with the throne located inside the top. There is a balcony and the inside is a maze of passage ways going in every direction. The castle is capable of flying at very high altitudes but in her inner world the castle doesn't move.
In front of the frost tower is a little town covered in snow and ice. The town has a small church, a frozen fountain in the centre of the town and multiple houses. The town is located next to the ice ring and the rest of the world is an ice deserted island.
SHIKAI:release command: Become the ice dragon of my frozen heart Kōri ryū.
description: Shikai appearance: Nishimura's sword becomes white and then blue down the blade. It has a long hilt with and ice nob at the end and 3 ice rings down the hilt. At the end is rings attached to each other and from it comes what looks like the mouth of a dragon and from it is the blade of the sword.
type: Ice
techniques:
Name: Icicle Fury Type: Offensive Cost: Medium Range: Long Description: When Nishimura swings her sword from above her head right down to the left, she releases sharp ice crystals at her enemies that does physical damage to her opponents.
Name: Ice Shard Type: Defense Cost: High Range: Close/Long Description: Creates a barrier of ice around Nishimura and the the barrier around bursts her into mulitple flying ice spears in all direction doing damage to everything
Name: Arctic Blast Type: Offensive Cost: High Range: Long Description: Nishimura hold her sword to her right side and pores her reiatsu into it that it almost looks like a cold blue flames on her sword. The reiatsu gather in the middle of her sword and the she swings it to her left releasing the blast on her sword to her enemies. It can be dodged or reflected if the opponent has higher reiatsu.
BANKAI:note that you cannot start off with bankai unless the character is AV-3 or higher.
name: usually in japanese, but doesn't have to be.
description: Bankai appearance: The swords hilt color changes to a gray color with a skull near the handle. A little down are two spikes going outward. a few inches of the sword has spikes going outward and the rest of blade is normal. The blade becomes white with ice covering the whole sword and the eyes of the skull glows blue.
User: Nishimura's bankai changes her hair to a white/light blue and cuts it short. She also get's ice wings on her back and a short white dress with the ice spears along side her. She also has a sheet of thin ice under her and an ice dragon simmilar to Kōri ryū behind her.
type:Ice
stat upgrades: which stats increase in bankai and by how much? Only fill this out after you have been given your class/level.
techniques:
Name: Misty Ice Dragon Type: Offensive Cooldown: 2 posts Cost: Med Range: Long Description: The ice dragon behind Nishimura flies into the sky and then dips downward while getting misty around it and smashed into the enemy causing damage. nts Sei/HAk is higher or equal in comparison.
Name: Icicle Fury Spears Type: Offensive Cooldown: 3 posts Cost: High Range: Med Description: The spears of Nishimura's shikai doubles the size it was and it looks like it has a cold blue mist around it. Nishimura marks the target with her reiatsu and it pulls the uncontrolled ones like a magnet to the target but she has to get close to the target and mark it with her hands or leave a wound with the sword. It can be broken if Sei/HAk is higher or equal in comparison.Due to it's size the spears travels at a slow speed giving the opponent time to make a plan. Nishimura doesn't use it often.
Name: Dragon prison Type: Offensive Cooldown: 4 posts Cost: High Range: Close Description: The dragon behind Nishimura charges at the enemy and circles around it trying to create a layer of thick ice with the enemy inside... the walls last for 2 posts.If Sei/HAk is higher or equal in comparison.
QUOTE OR LYRICS HERE; NOT TOO LONG HISTORY: Nishimura was born in Karakura town and the only daughter in the Shoko family but as a mistake. Her parents wanted a son because a son can do much more than a daughter. They believed that a daughter is only good for pleasure sports and doing all of the work in the house where the son can do anything and be controlled easier. So her parents waited for her until she was five years old. They told her that when she reaches that age something big will happen to her and she couldn’t wait. The first four years her parents treated her nicely with really no intention of doing so.
Nishimura was happy when she reached five until her parents gave her, her big surprise. Her surprise was abuse and slavery and she was not allowed to say anything to anyone. Things got really bad for her that she wanted to leave but knew she couldn’t. Her parents kept an eye on her throughout the day and after that year things got worse. Her parents enjoyed seeing her suffer, blaming her for being a daughter and not a son.
Nishimuras’ preschool life got bad. She grew distant and lost most of her friends and never talked to anyone. She mostly sat in one corner quietly that no one even knew she was there. She became depressed as well by the time she got to grade 7. In that time she had no friends and was considered a silent freak and other insults from kids. It got her angry for the insults but she mostly let it go and would sometimes say silent but violent back to the kids.
When she spoke there is an icy bite to her voice and has an icy stare which scared the kids in school. By the time she went to high school with very good grades which her parents expected. She no friends and also became known as a loner which she didn’t care about. The teachers were amazed at her grades and continued to excel which got her some glares from other top ranked students in the classes. Nishimura hated study but she was forced to do good so she had no other choice.
Nishimura hated her birthday because it’s the day when her parents are extremely hard on her. The beat her until she’s unconscious which she is always grateful for because the torture would end then. She was walking home from school when she heard a car speeding down the road and she tried her best to avoid it but to no avail. The car ram into her and into a nearby post, immediately killing her.
In her soul Nishimura wondered around her town seeking a place where she belongs. Nishimura was walking around one night when she heard something behind her. It was a hollow and as scared as she was she ran seeking a place to hide without her knowing that someone was also following the hollow. She accidentally tripped and fell face first to the ground and when she turned around she saw someone slice it in two from behind. She was grateful that somebody saved her. The shinigami who save her told her to go to the soul society and also to the academy.
She did was she was told and got into a high class at the school. She didn't know how she did it but didn't care either way and just went on with the school. She got high grades throughout the years at the academy, especially with sword fighting. Nishimura liked sword fighting because she had a score to settle with her parents but in order to do that she needed to strong and smart which is what drove her to have high grades in the academy.
If there was one thing Nishimura loved was research and developing other stuff which she did try to do when she was alive but of coarse her parents intervened, saying that they forbid her to invent anymore stuff. They were afraid that Nishimura might invent something that could help her. But now that she had a chance she went for squad twelfth.
Luckily for her she got into squad twelve as a seated officer and went on missions, fighting hollows and gathering intelligence. As the years went by fast she went up rank by rank and by the time she was 200 years old she finally became captain. Now being strong enough, it’s only a matter of time before she can get her revenge on her parents and show them what it’s like to be tortured.
RP SAMPLE:Nishimura was walking through the festival and loved what she saw. She can't believe that she had made it in time and was surprised to find her family at the festival. Nishimura walked up to her family with her pokemon on her shoulders as usual and greeted them but what she didn't know was is that they had a little surprise for her.
"Wow Nishimura you got a few pokemon."Her brother said amazed at how far she had gotten."Yeah and I love them very much so what are you guys doing here?" Nishimura asked but before her mother could answer her sisters Kawasawa and Kamata running up to her and screaming "Happy Birthday Sister!" Nishimura smiled and gave them a big hug and her mother gave her a pokeball and when it open an Snivy came out.
"Wow she's pretty." Nishimura said and bent down trying to touch the pokemon and to her surprised the pokemon climbed on her shoulders with the other and started chatting about themselves happily."And she's yours to keep Nishimura.It's your birthday gift."Her mother said. Nishimura was happy and decided to name her Louisa. The pokemon seem to be happy with her new name and then Nishimura looked at her father.
"Dad, is everything alright?" Nishimura asked with concern and her dad turned to her with an apologetic smile on his face. “As a matter of fact no. I... I mean we want to apologize for not letting you on this journey 6 years ago. It's just that we didn't want to lose a daughter. All of us know how it feels and I didn't want to go through that again. Because I might not have had the strength to prevent me for committing suicide and that would have put the rest of the family in more depression after your death. That's why I told you to let go of the Pokémon world and I thought you had when you got older but I was wrong. You were hiding it from me the whole time as well as your love for dragons."
Nishimura heard every word her father said and now knows why her father didn't want to let go. Nishimura with tears in her eyes gave her dad a hug."I get it dad that you didn't want to lose me and wanted me to grow up as a sophisticated girl and not a childish one. That's why I hid it from you and that I didn't want you to know because I knew you would be mad at me. Well I have to go nice seeing you again. Bye." Nishimura said and ran off to the festival and accidentally into someone.
She stood up and brushed the dirt of while saying sorry to the one she bumped into but didn't realized that it was her abusive ex boyfriend. She left running into the fair with her pokemon on her shoulders. She loved events like these, where she could meet new people and have some fun and relax after a long journey from Newbark Town.
The fair was soon closing and it was dawn already so she decided to make camp a few feet away from the fair. What she didn't realize was her ex waiting for her close by. Her pokemon scurried of her shoulders and started helping her. The Wurmple went to look for some food they all could eat and her Charmander went to look for some wood to make a fire while Snivy and Ratttata put up the tent for her. That's when he came out.
"So you decided to become a trainer hmm?" Tokishiro said mockingly to her. Nishimura gasp at the site of him, dropping the bag on the ground. "What are you doing here?" Nishimura asked in an angry voice. Before he could respond her pokemon attacked him and pinned him to the ground. He struggled to get up but went still as the Charmander was nearing his flaming tail near Tokishiro's body.
"You won't let you Charmander do this to me." Tokishoro said a little scared. Nishimura replied "Oh yes I will but I can ask them to get of you if you leave me alone from now on. Otherwise you might as well burn." Nishimura knew that he value his body to much as he considered it his "charm" to get women. "Alright, I'll leave you alone from now on, I promise" Tokishiro said in a hoarse voice. "Very well, you heard him guys" Nishimura commanded and they all got of. Tokishiro got up and ran way before Nishimura's pokemon could do worse.
CLASS/LEVEL:NV-1 STATS:HAN: 6 REI: 5 HAK: 7 SEI: 7 BUK: 7 HOH: 7 Points Earned: 0 Total points:39
QUOTE OR LYRICS HERE; NOT TOO LONG CBOX/OOC NAME:Nishimura. OTHER CHARACTERS:none |
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Post by Nishimura Shoko on Nov 14, 2013 0:00:21 GMT -5
I'm done.
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Post by ✭Ulqui-chan on Nov 14, 2013 0:08:17 GMT -5
The ability sections you have under shikai and bankai descriptions need to be made into techniques or removed completely.
You also need to make her fit into the squad she's captain of, Research and Development, since it is one if the more defined squads.
Once these are taken care of I can move forward with grading.
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Post by Nishimura Shoko on Nov 14, 2013 0:36:07 GMT -5
OK I got rid of the abilities and put the love for research and development in her history.
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Post by ✭Ulqui-chan on Nov 14, 2013 1:04:32 GMT -5
It needs to be included, in some form, in her personality section as well.
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Post by Nishimura Shoko on Nov 14, 2013 1:28:42 GMT -5
Alright I put it in likes and also in the overall personality.
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Post by ✭Ulqui-chan on Nov 14, 2013 10:53:06 GMT -5
Approved for NV-1 with 39 points. This isn't enough fir captain level or bankai. You can take a rank between third and fifth seat, though third seat for squad twelve is taken.
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Post by Nishimura Shoko on Nov 14, 2013 11:02:08 GMT -5
Stats are added.
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Post by ✭Ulqui-chan on Nov 14, 2013 12:13:39 GMT -5
Moving to Database
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