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Post by Cordius Valefor on Mar 3, 2013 7:40:16 GMT -5
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sex: Male | sexual orientation: Straight| race: Arrancar ALIASES:The Lone Raven, The Sentinel, The Nighthawk AGE:341 AGE OF APPEARANCE:30 years old or younger NUMBER:13 RANK:Arrancar BASE FORM:Adjuchas
I'm not that much to look at HEIGHT:195cm
WEIGHT:68kg
APPEARANCE: Cordius has pure white hair, green eyes and stubbles. He wears assassin's robes along with a hood. His hair style is spiked only wherein the spikes would be reaching backwards. His Hollow hole is located at the right part of his chest. He wears a Gauntlet on his left arm which almost seems like a fragment from when he was a hollow.
LIKES: -Taking stroll during the night - He likes to take his time thinking alone at the most peaceful time and place -He likes to bake which is a talent he has -A soft spot for little things that are ten centimeters short or less -Eavesdrops on the Espada without being noticed -Battlefields such as Forests or Urban areas, anything that has an obstruction or an object that can be used to either hide or use as cover -Eating extremely spicy meals -Relaxing and slacking -Fighting during the Night
DISLIKES: -Daytime which causes him to go lazy -Fighting with no reason -Heavily crowded places -Shinigamis currently on hunts -Forced to work on the most easiest of tasks
NEGATIVE TRAITS: -Lazy during the day -Attempts to create an episode of chaos, pranking some of the arrancars -Unpredictable, which makes him dangerous to both allies and enemies
POSITIVE TRAITS: -Mature enough to take opponents seriously such as regular shinigamis, lieutenants and Captains. -Active hunter during the night, dangerous opponent to extremely dark places. -Tends to protect those who cannot defend themselves.
EXTRAS: -Cordius is very unpredictable, keeping everyone in suspense despite the fact that he's a Lone Eagle. .
WEAPONS: A Crossbow attached to his right arm that can also serve as a gauntlet, breakable when strucked with a heavy blow. Fires bullets materialized with his spiritual pressure.
ZANPAKUTO:name: Ave Nocturna
sealed form: Dual wield short swords that are connectable.
RESURRECCION:Rise:
description: He connects his shortswords together to activate his Resurreccion. A gusty wind of feathers envelops his body concealing the transformation process, and so after its complete, these feathers are automatically fired at the enemy as a greeting. He develops black wings with a very hard Hierro. His Gauntlet on the left arm now has a blade which is used either to fire his Cero, a melee attack or to simply use it as a railgun to fire more quilts from it that deals damage.
The basic ability of Ave Nocturna completely knocks off any forms of projectile or beam attacks causing them to miss. For short he is impervious to any ranged attacks. The source of this ability would be his wings, wherein he can manipulate the wind patterns to his liking.
type:Night Bird
stats upgrade: HAN: +2 REI: +1 HAK:+1 SEI:+1 BUK:+1 HOH:+2
techniques:
For:Resurreccion Name: Pluma Tormenta Feather Storm Type:Offensive Cost: Normal Taxing Range: Long Description Fires thirty feathers. Each feather creates a small explosion as that of a small dynamite when they have contact with either the target or any surface. Charges for one post, no other skill can be executed during the action
For:Resurreccion Name:Le garra Mutilar: Centinela Indicativo Mutilating claws: Callsign of the Sentinel Type:Offensive/Passive Buff. Post duration depends on how much slashes target has taken as well as the number of threads he's been in Resurreccion Cost: Moderately Taxing Range: Melee Description:His Talons will charge with each successful strike, cutting bits off spiritual pressure. Once the claws are fully charged with spiritual energy from the numerous attacks, the marks left by Cordius will explode attempting to mutilate the target completely. The buff on those marks will disappear when Cordius changes back to human form
For:Resurreccion Name:elevarse de Cuervo The Ascending Raven Type:Offensive/Combo Cost: Moderate Range: Melee to 30 meters Description:The technique would start by throwing the opponent in midair, or if the opponent is in Midair he'd twirl his body creating a cyclone damaging and sending the opponent flying. It severely scratches the foe's bare skin. The scratches the target receives has the same effect as "Callsign of the Sentinel" Action depends if the opponent is on the ground.
For: Resurreccion Name: Hierro Cuervo: Ala Plegable Iron Raven:Folding Wings Type:Defensive/Counterattack/Passive (One attack post) Cost: Normal-Moderately Taxing (Depending on offensive value of the attacker) Range: Melee Description:Uses his wings to guard against a heavy melee attack in such a way the wings absorbs the blow and adds it to the counterattack value wherein after a successful block he'd unleash a counterattack striking melee with his wings and talons at the same time. The counterattack effect is only temporary for 10 seconds.
SEGUNDA ETAPA:note that you cannot start off with segunda etapa. It can be learned once the character reaches MT-2.
description: explain how the appearance of your character changes during segunda and their basic ability. It should build upon the appearance in resurreccion.
type: either list an element, or something else that clearly represents the abilities this character will gain in segunda etapa. Be aware that abilities do not stack (except stat changes), so all resurreccion techniques are replaced with the segunda etapa techniques upon release.
stat upgrades: which stats increase in res and by how much? Only fill this out after you have been given your class/level.
techniques: may have 4 to start. Register these through creation before adding them to your application.
HISTORY:
As a human - The Valefor human family is a bunch of English mercenaries who'd fight for money and will do suicide missions as long as the pay is high. Because his parents are always working around the world he was entrusted to his grandfather to take care of him. Cordius is quite fond of airborne fowl because they fly to the heavens despite the darkest of nights they still fly.
Cordius's Grandfather took him to a jungle in africa one day to see the animals up close, especially the birds. There was one time when Cordius got lost in the deep jungles only to find a trapped eagle in a thorned bush only to become a potential meal for the wolf. Cordius of course was holding a machete and stabbed the wolf, cutting of its limb, then freed the trapped eagle and because of that the eagle guided him back to his grandfather. The eagle then became Cordius pet and so he named it "Alucard" the Bird of Hermes.
By the time they returned from africa they received word that Cordius's parents died. They were assassinated by some people who has beef with their parents. This motivated Cordius to take on the family business in hopes to kill those who had killed his parents. Though of course he never gave alucard a cage he'd let alucard fly high and do as it pleases.
Years past and soon he became a mercenary greater than his parents and his grandfather. He successfully took revenge on those who assassinated his family and moved on to becoming a baker. He recently fell in love with a woman that goes to his bakery everyday to buy cakes and sweers. One fateful night came when he heard from the black suburbs that there were people who's planning to assassinate the woman that visits his shop, so he prepared his gun and gear and moved out towards the location.
He ambushed the attackers and thus saving the woman he loved only to have been shot by her. It turns out she was the daughter of the ones that assassinated his parents. She set him up just so she can end his life. He was on the verge of death, his gun was at his hand but couldn't find the heart to shoot her. Soon Alucard came and attacked the woman scratching her face only to die trying to save Cordius. Having seen his animal and friend shot he shot the woman down to the ground.
Of course he never made it either.
As a hollow - He is devious much likely the type to wait out to see if there's a dying hollow in sight in such a way he'd mutilate and eat it, the perfect assassin. Soon he entered a battle he has no chance of winning and was left for dead to be eaten by the other hollows only to be saved by Alucard who is a hollow himself. In order to save Cordius Alucard gave its body up for Cordius to live on giving him wings.
As an Arrancar - And soon came the day till he became an arrancar. After hearing that a man called Aizen died he decided to go over to las noches to hear the story. Soon he was accepted and known to be a lone cunning eagle. His primary role is to investigate specific targets in the human world. RP SAMPLE:It was five in the morning, he came inside the bakery where his body in the Real world is and phased through it, then he started to work with the essential sweets like cookies and cupcakes an hour before opening.
The history of getting his job started off from the time the body was made and he was sent to the Real world to investigate the one known as Urahara.
He was just a regular arrancar back then.
He wasn't so difficult to find however approaching him was the hard part. Of course he easily got distracted by his merchandise wondering what he'll buy from him just to make it look like he's a regular customer. Unfortunately he doesn't have any money to pay him. CLASS/LEVEL:NV-2 STATS:HAN: 7 REI:5 HAK:5 SEI:5 BUK:5 HOH:7 Points Earned: 0 Total points:34
CBOX/OOC NAME:Cordius ( Not fixed ) OTHER CHARACTERS:None |
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Post by Hash on Mar 4, 2013 23:36:04 GMT -5
You need to copy and paste the techniques that were approved in creation into this app before I can grade it.
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Post by Cordius Valefor on Mar 4, 2013 23:46:17 GMT -5
All done.
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Post by Hash on Mar 5, 2013 0:00:06 GMT -5
The highest I can approve this for is NV-2 with 34 points. The required class/level for the 7th Espada is AV-1, so I can't let you take that rank, unfortunately. You can however take a position as someone's Fraccion or go freelance. Please edit this app to specify what your rank will be and let me know.
You can go ahead and fill out the fields: class/level, stats, and stat upgrades for Resurreccion.
Please comment here when the necessary changes are made. ^^
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Post by Cordius Valefor on Mar 5, 2013 0:37:16 GMT -5
Modifications set.. unsure if he's going to be Epsada 0's fraccion but I guess that will happen during the story.
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Post by Hash on Mar 5, 2013 0:39:30 GMT -5
You put the stats in the stat upgrades section and left the actual stats section as well as the class/level section blank. If you don't know what the upgrades are, you'll need to read the stat system thread if you haven't already.
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Post by Cordius Valefor on Mar 5, 2013 0:40:05 GMT -5
Modified
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Post by Hash on Mar 5, 2013 1:11:56 GMT -5
Did you actually change anything? Because it's exactly the same as before. Please read the stat system thread like I asked and maybe look at other approved characters to see how they did it. Resurreccion stat upgrades, stats, and class/level all need to be filled out properly before I can approve this.
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Post by Cordius Valefor on Mar 5, 2013 3:30:02 GMT -5
I'm sorry about that I'm definitely dizzy.
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Post by Hash on Mar 5, 2013 8:55:18 GMT -5
You still haven't filled out the stat upgrades section properly. Like I said, if you don't know how to do that, read the stat system topic and look at other approved characters.
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Post by Cordius Valefor on Mar 5, 2013 9:06:50 GMT -5
Oh sorry I posted that one on the stats system above.
I also have edited my base form to adjuchas.
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Post by Hash on Mar 5, 2013 9:10:13 GMT -5
I'm not seeing it anywhere... please just put the stat upgrades in the stat upgrades field in the resurreccion section. Example: +2 REI, +5 BUK, +3 HAK
I don't want to have to ask again. x.x
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Post by Ankoku on Mar 5, 2013 9:58:57 GMT -5
Hash, his stats are there...Maybe it's not loading for you..But they are there.
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Post by Cordius Valefor on Mar 5, 2013 10:05:16 GMT -5
I'm terribly sorry for my idiotic clumsiness.
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Post by Hash on Mar 5, 2013 11:07:35 GMT -5
stats upgrade: HAN:- 7 REI: - 5 HAK:- 5 SEI:- 5 BUK:- 5 HOH:- 7 Points Earned: 0 Total points:34
this is what I'm seeing where upgrades are supposed to be. I'm not talking about stats, I'm talking about upgrades.
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