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Post by dirge hakai on Apr 8, 2013 15:05:29 GMT -5
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sex: male | sexual orientation: Straight | race: Bount ALIASES:The Black Death AGE:453 AGE OF APPEARANCE:Mid 30's
quote or lyrics here; not too long FACE CLAIM:Castlevania: Castle of Darkness - Hector
HEIGHT:6'3
WEIGHT:168
APPEARANCE:Ryu stands at 6'3, Sporting short but spiky dove white hair. He wears a silk shirt that's hued for most of it however has the right arm sleeve colored black. His pants are also made of silk and are colored black as well, Over his shirt he wears a V shaped object that is made of metal. He wears a single white glove on his left hand (Sword hand) and carries himself with pride and honor. HE wears a red sash around his midsection that is made of cloth. At times he can be seen wearing a long cloak which extends just a little past his feet, This too is made of silk and is hued red on the inside, Black on the outside. The cloak itself is wide enough to wrap around his entire body and meet at the center of his chest. He has a single golden ring on his right middle finger. He has completely white eyes.
quote or lyrics here; not too long LIKES: » Family » Shi Hakai » Bounts » Hollws/Shinigami (They taste good) » Destruction
DISLIKES: » People who mess with his family » Idiots » Quincy (They taste terrible) » Arrogant Bastards » The Gotei 13
NEGATIVE TRAITS:» Violent » Psychotic Tendancies » Overprotective at times. » Doesn't stop. » Unpredictable.
POSITIVE TRAITS: » Extreme Intellegence » Fearless » Protective » Very well trained » Calculative
EXTRAS:~ Violent Dirge is a very violent fellow, Because of his upbringing and what happened in his past, Dirge has developed an extreme violent side, Holding a record for most Shinigami killed in a single day at a young age. His parents, The same as Shi Hakai, had actually been together for several hundred years before even Dirge was born, And even longer before Shi Hakai was born. He became exceedingly protective over his baby sister when she was born, However vanished when she was age 3 for unknown reasons. Because of his mysterious disappearance, They kept his existence hidden from Shi and had supressed that part of their memory.
~ Psychotic Dirge would be one who would be classified as having Psychotic tendancies. Much like the 1,000 year old bount, Netherland, His passion for bloodlust is neverending, Going against seemingly overwhelming numbers and yet always coming out the victor without a scratch on him. Most might say this was the reason for his disappearance, Smart people would stay away from that topic.
~ Protective No matter who it is, Hollow, Shinigami, Quincy, Bount, If he sees you as a threat to someone he calls Familia, You are on his kill list. Simple as can be. He doesn't like it when people fuck with his family, His moto: Fuck with me, I'll beat you with a shovel, fuck with my friends, I'll slice your arms off. Fuck with my family, I'll beat you to death with my bare hands.
~ Fearless Since his sister was born, Dirge has lost all sense of fear. He isn't in the least bit afraid of anyone, Tall or small. Big or little. Stronger or weaker. In this regard, One might say he's akin to Kenpachi, A man who laughs in the face of death and adversity, Uncaring of what his opponents strengths or weaknesses are, Uncaring if his opponent has an overwhelming advantage. This trait is what makes Dirge so dangerous. When in danger and fear is inflicted upon him, He laughs at it and kills you anyway.
~ Extreme Intellegence Despite his 'brutish' outlook on things, Do not let that fool you. Because of his age, Dirge is exceedingly intellegent and has faced many many opponents. Just because he looks weak, Doesn't mean you can beat him simply with a power advantage. If anything, That means you're more prone to being killed by him.
quote or lyrics here; not too long WEAPONS:A long yet wide rapier that has been specially made so that it can not just pierce but cut. Do not mistake it for an actualy regular sword however, While ti can slash effectively, It still does the best with piercing blows.
DOLL:name: Dread Master
sealed form: The sealed form is the golden ring that resides on Dirge's right middle finger.
ZEIGE DICH!:description: Dread Master relies on manipulation and diversion, Specilizing in distracting her or the bounts target while also manipulating both herself and the bount. Do not be fooled however, Not only does she manipulate herself and her bount with varies buffs, She can also apply debuffs to the target as well. The buffs/Debuffs that can be applied are further explained in her techs below and let it be known that if the Status Effect is not listed in one of the techs below, Then she cannot perform it.
Dread Master stands at about 5'3 and has black hair extending down to her waist. She has black wings that are covered in feathers much like a doves. She wears a simple long black dress as well and has a ring on her right middle finger that looks like her sealed form. She has small black eyes and black ribbons extending down from her shoulders and attatched to where her sleeves would be if she had any. The dress itself comes down to just below her knees.
type: Short-Mid ranged based fighter, Specilizing in fighitng at close range or at mid range. This is augmented by her varies abilities.
techniques:
For:Doll Release Name: Shi no kanshoku (Death Touch) Type:Offensive Cost: Mid-High Range: Low Description:Shi no kanshoku adds extra damage equal to the amount paid for 1 post, This doesn't effect attacks that have a range greater then melee, Only melee attacks. This is done by pumping a mixture of Reiatsu and Reishi into the hands, arms and legs of the user.
For: Doll Release Name: Ninja no manto (Cloak of the Ninja) Type: Supplementary Cost: High Range: High Description: Ninja no manto applies a buff that cloaks the doll and the bount, Making it harder to both see and sense it. This masks both it's Reiatsu and itself by varying amounts dependant on rank. One might compare the visibility debuff to that of a cameleon, To those who are perceptive enough (Higher rank) they'd still be able to see it though would have a little bit of trouble, To those who aren't very perceptive (Lower rank) then they'd have a much much harder time.
Reiatsu Sensing Higher ranks: Masks the doll 25% more then normal. Equal ranks: Masks the doll 40% more then normal. Lower ranks: Makes the doll 55% to sense.
Visibility: Higher ranks: Makes the doll and bount 25% harder to see. Equal ranks: Makes the doll and bount 40% harder to see. Lower ranks: Makes the doll and bount 55% harder to see.
For: Doll Release Name: Heightened Senses Type: Passive Cost: Low Range: Low Description: Heightened Senses increases the doll and bounts ability to notice incoming attacks from any direction, This doesn't increase their reaction time directly, Merely augments their capability to noticing attacks. This is because of the close connection that Dirge has to his doll, And his doll to him. Because of their close connection, They are able to communicate on a telepathic level without even hinting that they are talking to the other.
MERGING:note that you cannot start off with the ability to merge with your doll. It can be learned once the character reaches EL-2. Keep in mind that once a bount merges with his doll, the changes are PERMANENT. This includes stat changes. Upon marging, all former techniques and the original appearance of the bount will be lost for good.
description: explain how the appearance of your character changes and their basic ability once merged. It should be a combination of doll and user. Since merges are permanent and you get new powers in return, there are no stat upgrades.
type: either list an element, or something else that clearly represents the abilities this character will gain once merged.
techniques: may have 4 to start. Register these through creation before adding them to your application.
QUOTE OR LYRICS HERE; NOT TOO LONG HISTORY:Most of his past is shrouded in mystery as only he remembers it. Though his parents who were consumed by Shi know of it, They locked their memories away so even Shi cannot access them. What is known, Is that during the early years of Shi's life, He was exceedingly protective. Killing anyone who dared to insult her or try to attack her. He didn't care who it was, He didn't care what the crime, He didn't let anyone mess with his sister and live to tell the tale. During her 2nd year alive, He began being seen less and less by his family. When asked what was happening and why he kept vanishing at odd hours, He made no comment on the subject. The only thing known was each time he came back he was more and more bloody then the night before. When Shi turned 3, These vanishings got worse and worse until about 6 months after her 3rd birthday when he simply vanished without a trace. His parents searched for him until Shi was 4, At that point they repressed all knowledge of him in both themselves and in Shi, Effectively erasing him from their memory. Being as how Shi was so young, She really didn't understand anything very well anyway and so never questioned this. Dirge had actually left Japan entirely, Moving to the United States to try and start new. However upon finding out about his parents deaths and Shi's vanishing act, He immediately moved back to Japan in search for her. After almost 8 years of searching, He's finally tracked her down and is now on his way to reclaim his Sister and kill anyone who dares stand in his way...No matter who they are.
Stepping back into his past a bit to where he attained his doll, It was odd really how he did it. Most bounts find their dolls, However his doll found him. He was out shopping for his kid sister, He had gotten her a shiny golden ring as a 'remembrance' gift since he knew he'd be leaving shortly after, However, On his trip home he 'bumped' into a few Shinigami attacking a hollow. Needless to say, Dirge didn't exactly take kindly to Shinigami in the first place. However, Dirge didn't attack them, Rather he attacked the hollow. The Shinigami had seemed to be struggling with it. When the Shinigami saw this, He merely smiled and turned towards them, Asking if they were going to attack him next. At first, the shinigami were confused by his question, However once he told them he was a bount...It seemed like a no brainer for the Shinigami in question. Bounts were a sworn enemy of Soul Society, As a result, They were a "Kill on sight" priority. The Shinigami attacked Dirge, And for awhile seemed to have the upper hand...However, When the Shinigami had seemed to 'Be winning', That's when the tides turned, Dirge congratulated them on their bravery and their strength, However also told them that it was time for them to die. Upon that announcement, His ring began to glow an omonious black before 'coming to life' as he described it. From it, Appeared a women that stood roughly 5'3 with black wings made of the tainted Reishi of Dirge. She said nothing, However, As his doll put it, She 'Carried out his orders'. She attacked the Shinigami almost immediately, The Shinigami having taken some damage already, Didn't have the strength to combat the newcomer and in the end were slaughtered by the female. After consuming what was left of the Shinigami, Dirge decided it was time to face the doll and question who it was. Dirge knew he finally had attained a doll, However Dirge didn't know what the dolls name was. They talked while he headed towards his house and from then on, Dirge knew both who his doll was, And how to call upon it on a whim. RP SAMPLE: It was the start of another beautiful day in Karakura town. Dirge had just woken up and most of his family were still asleep, It was about 6 A.M. so the morning dew was juststarting to settle into the grass as the sun slowly began to peak up over the horizon. Dirge left the house and moved to the front porch, Yawning and stretching as he sat down on the porch swing. He kicked back a little to start a gentle and slow rocking motion as he transitioned into a deep thought. 'Very soon...I'll have to leave' He thought to himself, Looking back at the door to the house for a moment 'I can't let *them* find them....' He thought once more. Who was he talking about when he thought *them*? Quite simple really.....Shinigami, But not just Shinigami, Quincies as well. Dirge wasn't exactly high up on the likable list for those two races. He'd killed many of them already and was only able to get away because of the unique trait that all bounts possessed from the moment they were born. Their tainted Reishi was untrackable by anything except for one specific piece of machinery that one Mayuri Kurotsuchi possessed, And even then...It required a sample of said bount. So why was Dirge worried? Simple, He'd been getting trailed lately...While he was able to escape it most of the time...He was having increasing trouble getting away so he knew he had to go into hiding soon before they found him and his family.
He closed his eyes and sighed softly, Letting his frame relax in the swing. He shared a room with his Sister, They were 'poor' by human standards so they only had a small 2 bedroom place they were renting. His eyes were opened and pulled towards the door as it opened, His sight now set upon his sister whom was dressed in a long bath robe, Most likely to cover up her night gown. His sister looked around a little sleepily before spotting him and moving over to him, Sitting down next to him on the swing and pulling her feet up onto it. She rested her head on his shoulder and closed her eyes with a smile, Dirge returned her smile and placed one arm around her. He was going to miss this, Being able to hold his Sister and know he could easily protect her. While Dirge was strong and his relationship with his doll was getting stronger...If the Shinigami or Quincy found them...There was no doubt that they'd be slaughtered. Dirge couldn't let that happen...He let out a soft sigh as he rested his head lightly on hers, Still deep in thought. Shi, His sister, Didn't have a doll yet and she was still very very young, Even for a bount. Because of this, Dirge felt it was his job to protect her with everything he had, Even if it cost his life. Shi was probably still too young to remember him if he just vanished and that's what he was counting on. He couldn't have her trying to find him....If the Shinigami or Quincy found out...They'd use her. Shi was naive, Extremely so. He wanted her to grow up living a happy normal life.
CLASS/LEVEL:AV-3 STATS:HAN: 8 REI: 16 HAK: 7 SEI: 7 BUK: 16 HOH: 16 Points Earned: 0 Total points:70
QUOTE OR LYRICS HERE; NOT TOO LONG CBOX/OOC NAME:Dirge OTHER CHARACTERS:list them here. |
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Post by dirge hakai on Apr 9, 2013 22:36:59 GMT -5
Techs have been added and approved
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Post by dirge hakai on Apr 11, 2013 18:50:56 GMT -5
appearance for the doll has been added
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Post by Ankoku on Apr 11, 2013 20:04:37 GMT -5
Your ability insinuates stat changes, please fix that as abilities that alter stats are not allowed.
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Post by dirge hakai on Apr 12, 2013 8:33:48 GMT -5
Love how you state "Your ability insuiates stat changes please change it" as though I only have a single ability
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Post by Ankoku on Apr 12, 2013 9:59:08 GMT -5
Uh, yes, you only have one ability, the rest are techs. The ability is what the techs branch from. Now, please remove the buff effect from your ability or I cannot accept this.
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Post by dirge hakai on Apr 12, 2013 10:11:18 GMT -5
I'm going to just go ahead and request a mod that actually says what they are requesting changed
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Post by Pheonix on Apr 12, 2013 11:48:20 GMT -5
Alright, calm down.
Buff or Debuff is usually a stat change. That's how it is treated in pretty much everything. So, please, remove the part about buffing and debuffing.
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Post by dirge hakai on Apr 12, 2013 12:12:03 GMT -5
Apparently I alsoforgot to add something so I'll ask it here instead: Essentially what you're wanting me to do is change her fighting style, Which means having to completely redo the techs since her current fighting style is what the abilities she has are based off
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Post by Pheonix on Apr 12, 2013 12:34:21 GMT -5
no, I am not. You do not have ANY debuffs, and only two buffs. You also don't have to classify them as such. It's to make things simpler. When you say buff or debuff, the site generally considers it a buff or debuff in stats. Just like in general in most games, it is a stat increase or decrease. You don't have to change anything besides removing the part about buffing and bebuffing. I really don't see why it's that big of a deal
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Post by dirge hakai on Apr 12, 2013 15:51:58 GMT -5
Okay first off I wasn't talking to you Pheonix, I didn't even see that you had posted.
Secondly, YES, It is that big of a deal to "Create a shit storm over wording" because that's EXACTLY what she does, To state otherwise would be false and thus wouldn't make the app approvable. The doll is focused around buffs and debuffs, Why doesn't she have anything that specifically targets someone else? Well first off because I figured (With the way things are going thus far) That would be rejected instantly and from what I'm seeing, I'm correct. Since you cannot directly affect stats at all with anything then that quite literally leaves nothing left to do. To say she can slow their speed would directly effect their stats, Their strength too. So what's left? I can't in anyway justify reducing their reaction time (Which could be considered speed) I can't hinder their sight (Which again people can say is directly related to speed). What can I debuff right now? Nothing. To state that I have to remove that one aspect, Which is exactly what her ENTIRE character is based around, Would mean I have to remove her techs and resubmit new ones.
Also, I do so hope you aren't just talking to me about that disrespect.
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Post by Pheonix on Apr 12, 2013 16:09:39 GMT -5
Ight.
Mmm, alright, i see what you mean. Will you please add in something along the lines of the buffs/debuffs will be explain by the techs, then? Just to clarify that she can't use any buff or debuff that is NOT listed as a technique. We just want to avoid manipulating stats, and making everything clear.
Secondly, we do allow debuffs, but they cannot directly affect stats. You could make something that affects the senses, which in turn will create the desired affect. Or even a smoke screen or mist. As long as it isn't an auto-hit and doesn't affect stats, it is generally okay. (however, it is too late now to aid techs. When you rank up you can add another tech, or you can spend points you get from threads for techs)
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Post by dirge hakai on Apr 12, 2013 19:57:21 GMT -5
Very well, The desired request has been fulfilled as How's that?
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Post by Pheonix on Apr 13, 2013 12:51:00 GMT -5
Approved for AV-3 with 70 points. You can fill in your class, level and stats. Once you're done, post again so everything is checked. After that, this profile will be moved into the database
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Post by dirge hakai on Apr 13, 2013 13:08:51 GMT -5
Done
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