Cheshire
Newbie
The Feline Riddler
Posts: 6
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Post by Cheshire on Jul 22, 2013 2:43:37 GMT -5
For:Cheshire Gata Name: Mesh Wid Yo Head Crap Attack Zach Mack Sup Snacks Snup Snoopy Super Sadistic Shi-bang bang Technique' a KamaHamaHeeeeee (Also known as telekinesis) Type: offensive or defensive Cooldown: 1 post 3 post cool down Cost: high Range: 50 meters Description: I'm sure we all know what telekinesis is (mentally controlling an object from afar; in some places, like my mind, in may remind you of Chickens at mcdonalds doing those things that the cows do at chick-fa-le or however you spell it. maybe not, but if your mad, maybe, just maybe. I should be a song writer). Cheshire may control multiple objects(5) at a time, but may only control those objects for 1 post. He may control all objects within 50 meters, but may throw objects telekinetically at varying lengths, so long as he controlled the object within 50 meters. Normal laws of physics apply, so if there's a force making it incredibly hard to control the object, telekinetic control may have to be given up (if the force or pressure or whatever makes the object harder than 100 lbs to control, control must be given up; and with that, obviously:) Cheshire may only control 100 lbs within his 50 meter radius. The multiple objects' weight must add up to 100lbs or less.
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Post by ✭Ulqui-chan on Jul 22, 2013 2:55:07 GMT -5
-You need to have a set cooldown for anything. You will not be able to use a high cost ability more than once in a post or you would completely drain yourself. At best you can use it every 5. -Your range needs to be dropped way down. 50 meters at best for something like this. -You need to drop the weights way down given the shortened range. -You need one set duration as well. You can control more than one object at a time but you would only have control of all objects during this time.
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Post by ✭Ulqui-chan on Jul 22, 2013 3:09:15 GMT -5
-You're cool down needs to be higher for this -you also need to have a set number on objects you are able to control at one time
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Post by ✭Ulqui-chan on Jul 22, 2013 3:17:30 GMT -5
Fix the cool down section in your cost since none of the really applies now. It really only needs to state High anyway. Then We'll be good to go.
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Post by ✭Ulqui-chan on Jul 22, 2013 3:27:06 GMT -5
With a duration you wouldn't be using it twice in one post. Its like an activated ability that lasts for your duration. Though thinking of it now the cool down should be 3.
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Post by ✭Ulqui-chan on Jul 22, 2013 3:35:16 GMT -5
Le Approved~
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