Kiyameru's Blades

Feb 24, 2013 20:46:47 GMT -5 Kiyameru Kurakunaru said:

For: Shikai
Name: Shinpan no Naginata [Halberd of Judgement]
Type: Weapon Form
Cost: Minor Stamina Reduction
Range: Short Range
Description: Kiyameru transforms his sword into a halberd in order to learn any fighting style involving two-handed axes. This may also be used for heavier attacks and his own created styles. 5 post duration, 2 post cooldown.

For: Shikai
Name: Seisan no Daisho
Type: Weapon Form
Cost: Minor Stamina Deduction
Range: Short Range
Description: Kiyameru transforms Hinikuna into a pair of daisho, the katana completely jet black and the wakizashi completely white. Meant for two-sword fighting styles as well as his own. This provides much more agile attacks as the blades are condensed. 5 post duration, 2 post cooldown

For: Shikai
Name: Jurrei no Kureimoa
Type: Weapon Form
Cost: Minor Stamina Deduction
Range: Short Range
Description: Kiyameru transforms Hinikuna into a gigantic claymore with wave-arc-shaped end. This allows for slightly swifter but weaker attacks than the halberd. This is meant for great sword fighting styles. 5 post duration, 2 post cool down.

For: Shikai
Name: Bosutaffu
Type: Weapon Form
Cost: Minor Stamina Deduction
Range: Short Range
Description: Kiyameru transforms his blade into a bo staff for styles according to the weapon specified. This allows for much more agile and momentum-based attacks. This lasts for 5 posts and have a 2 post cool down.

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For: Bankai
Name: Furibuki: Boryoku Masuku Kaiju [Violent Unmasking]
Type: Physical Attack
Cost: Minor-Moderate Stamina Deduction
Range: Mid-Range
Description:Using the average slash while unsheathing, Kiyameru may instead release a highly condensed arc of reiryoku to extend the range of his attack. This has a cool down of 3 posts.

For: Bankai
Name: Noto: Hebisureiya [Heavy Slayer]
Type: Physical Attack
Cost: Moderate Stamina Consumption
Range: Short-range
Description: Condensing high amounts of reiryoku into his blade for a much strong version of the the upwards slash performed when using the fighting style, Noto. This has a 3 post cooldown.

For: Bankai
Name: Nitojutsu [Two-Sword Style]
Type: Weapon Form
Cost: Moderate Stamina Deduction
Range: Short Range
Description: Kiyameru creates a second version of his blade, which is shortened to 1.9 feet long. He uses Nitojutsu to its highest extent of skill for 5 posts with a 2 post cool down.

For: Bankai
Name: Sebunburēdo Satsugai Seremonī [Seven Blade Slaying Ceremony]
Type: Physical Combo
Cost: Heavy Stamina Deduction
Range: Short and Mid Range
Description: For the next seven slashes, reiryoku is highly condensed into the blade for drastic blows, switching from normal-range slashes to releasing arcs of reiryoku in a 1-2 pattern. This charges for two posts, needing a large amount for continuous attacks. Kiyameru may charge for an additional post and make all seven attacks short-range for the highest of power. This has a 6 post cooldown.

Red: Given the sheer adaptability changing your weapon gives you, and the surprise factor, I'd like you to upgrade the cost from minor to moderate. Whilst you've said it lasts for five posts, you've not stated that it absoloutely has to (not that I think it should have to, may I just point out) but this ability to switch weapons on the fly for little to no cost goes against the grain with me. Please up the cost.

Blue: Given the strength of this technique, I'd like the cooldown to increase to five posts please.

Purple: No problem with the technique, but I'd like to see a little more explanation as to your creation of an entirely separate weapon, even if it is a copy. Is it a physical weapon, or is it simply reiatsu given form? For instance, say a character has reiatsu nullification abilities, would it have an effect upon this secondary weapon?

That's all the issues I have with this set of abilities.